Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading at home where I am more comfortable and less distracted." Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

例: I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading at home where I feel more comfortable and can concentrate better.

提案: Use past tense consistently and avoid repetition. For example, say "When I was at university, I usually went to the library to do assignments with my friends." Also, add linking words to improve coherence.

例: When I was at university, I usually went to the library to do assignments with my friends because it was a quiet place to study together.

提案: Use correct verb tenses and avoid unnecessary repetition. For example, say "Yes, when I was young, I usually went to the library to read comic books rather than educational books." Also, explain why you preferred comics to add detail.

例: Yes, when I was young, I usually went to the library to read comic books because I found them more entertaining than educational books.

提案: Avoid confusing statements and improve clarity. For example, say "Although I am Italian, I have read that Chinese students often go to the library to study." Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

例: Although I am Italian, I have read that Chinese students often go to the library to study because they value education highly.

× For me, I'm not often go to the library because I prefer to read books at my home because I don't get a distraction and reading up my home it makes me feel more comfortable.

✓ For me, I don't often go to the library because I prefer to read books at my home since I don't get distracted and reading at my home makes me feel more comfortable.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm not often go' which mixes present continuous and simple present tense. The correct form is 'I don't often go' to express habitual action. Also, 'reading up my home' is incorrect; it should be 'reading at my home'. The phrase 'because I don't get a distraction' should be 'since I don't get distracted' to use the correct verb form and preposition.

× Of course, when I went to the library, when I studied in my university, I always go to do an assignment with my friend or a work group with my friend.

✓ Of course, when I went to the library during my university studies, I always went to do assignments with my friends or in a work group with my friends.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'I always go' should be 'I always went' to match the past context. Also, 'a work group with my friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the plural context. 'An assignment' is better as 'assignments' to indicate general activities.

× Of course yes. When I was young I usually go to the library to read some comic, not about the knowledge books, which is is very bad for me, but I I like to read a comic books when I was young.

✓ Of course, yes. When I was young, I usually went to the library to read some comics, not knowledge books, which was very bad for me, but I liked to read comic books when I was young.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'go' and 'like' when referring to past habits; they should be in past tense 'went' and 'liked'. 'Comic' should be plural 'comics' and 'a comic books' is incorrect; it should be 'comic books'. Also, 'which is is' is a typo and should be 'which was' to agree with past tense.

× Well, as Italian people, I can tell you that Chinese go to the library often or not. But when I read some news about Chinese student, yes, they always go to the library to study.

✓ Well, as an Italian person, I can tell you that Chinese people go to the library often or not. But when I read some news about Chinese students, yes, they always go to the library to study.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Italian people' when referring to self as singular; it should be 'an Italian person'. 'Chinese' should be 'Chinese people' to indicate plural. 'Chinese student' should be plural 'Chinese students' to match the plural verb 'they always go'.