Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, for example, avoid repeating phrases like "if one if I want to focus". Also, use articles correctly, such as "the library". Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I often go to the library when I need to do research or concentrate on my assignments because I love the quiet and peaceful ambience there.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition and awkward linking words. Avoid repeating words like "just a just a" and "I I". Also, "nevertheless" is not appropriate here. Try to answer the question directly and use simple linking words like "but" or "nowadays". Provide more specific details about your current activities in the library.

例: When I was a child, I used to read magazines in the library. But now, I usually read newspapers or study for my courses there.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by adding articles like "the library" and by using more varied vocabulary. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: Yes, of course. When I was a kid, I often went to the library to read magazines because they had interesting pictures and stories that I enjoyed.

提案: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. For example, "well equipment libraries" should be "well-equipped libraries". Also, "good interest" is vague. Try to use clearer expressions and linking words to explain your opinion logically.

例: Although China has many well-equipped libraries, I think most children prefer using digital devices to read nowadays because it is more convenient and interesting for them.

× Yes I do. When I want do some research or focus on my assignments I go to library and I love the ambience of library if one if I want to focus on my research.

✓ Yes I do. When I want to do some research or focus on my assignments I go to the library and I love the ambience of the library if I want to focus on my research.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Missing 'the' causes the sentence to sound unnatural and grammatically incorrect.

× When I want do some research or focus on my assignments I go to library and I love the ambience of library if one if I want to focus on my research.

✓ When I want to do some research or focus on my assignments I go to the library and I love the ambience of the library if I want to focus on my research.

The verb 'want' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to do' rather than the bare verb 'do'. This is a common verb + infinitive structure in English.

× When I was just a just a kid, I I used to read magazines in library. But now nevertheless now I read some new news.

✓ When I was just a kid, I used to read magazines in the library. But now, nevertheless, I read some news.

Again, 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify the place. Also, 'new news' is redundant; 'news' is uncountable and does not need 'new' here. 'Nevertheless' should be set off by commas for clarity.

× Yes, of course. When I was a kid, I went to library to read magazines because of the interesting pictures and stories that the magazines have.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was a kid, I went to the library to read magazines because of the interesting pictures and stories that the magazines have.

The definite article 'the' is necessary before 'library' to indicate a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× Although China has well equipment libraries, I think they use digital appliances for reading rather than libraries, and they have good interest.

✓ Although China has well-equipped libraries, I think they use digital appliances for reading rather than libraries, and they have good interest.

The phrase 'well equipment libraries' is incorrect; the correct adjective form is 'well-equipped'. This adjective properly describes the libraries as having good equipment.