Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to give a more natural and detailed answer by explaining your reasons and possibly mentioning alternatives. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading articles online. However, I sometimes visit it to study in a quiet environment.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding more specific details and using linking words to make it more coherent.

例: In the library, I usually read books and search for new information, especially on topics related to my studies, which helps me learn more effectively.

提案: Good direct answer. To improve, add linking words and more specific details to enrich your response.

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I had enough books at home, so I preferred reading those instead.

提案: Try to answer the question by giving a general opinion or making a guess, even if you are not sure. This shows your ability to engage with the question.

例: I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese kids go to the library because it's a good place to study and find books for school.

× In the library I usually read books and find some new information.

✓ In the library, I usually read books and find some new information.

A comma is needed after the introductory phrase 'In the library' to separate it from the main clause, improving sentence clarity and correctness.