Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to give a direct response first, then add a clear reason without repeating phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: No, I don't often go to the library. I usually only visit school or university libraries because I haven't felt the need to go elsewhere.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and confidence. Provide a direct answer first, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid filler words and hesitations.

例: When I go to the library, I usually read books. Besides that, I sometimes study or use the computers available there.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Give a clear, concise response with correct grammar and avoid repeating yourself.

例: No, I didn't go to the library much as a child because I wasn't interested in reading at that time.

提案: Avoid responding with uncertainty. Instead, give an opinion directly and support it with reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: I believe many Chinese kids often go to the library because education is highly valued in China, and libraries provide good resources for studying.

× I've never been to the library except from the school, except school libraries or university libraries because I don't know, I never wanted to go there.

✓ I've never been to the library except at school, except school libraries or university libraries because I don't know, I never wanted to go there.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect after 'except' in this context. The correct preposition to indicate location is 'at'. So, 'except from the school' should be 'except at school'. This improves the sentence's grammatical correctness and clarity.

× So if I went there, I probably read books or yeah, what what did I do except of reading books?

✓ So if I went there, I probably read books or yeah, what did I do except reading books?

The phrase 'except of reading books' is incorrect. The correct form is 'except reading books' without the preposition 'of'. This is because 'except' is directly followed by a gerund when excluding an activity.

× Libraries wasn't my biggest.

✓ Libraries weren't my biggest.

The subject 'Libraries' is plural, so the verb should be 'weren't' instead of 'wasn't' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× In the libraries was not in my biggest wanted needed things or what did I say?

✓ Libraries were not among the things I wanted or needed the most, or what did I say?

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. The correction restructures the sentence to clearly express that libraries were not among the most wanted or needed things. This fixes sentence structure errors.