Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时时态使用不够准确，且句子较长，表达略显复杂。建议简化句子结构，注意时态一致性，并且回答更自然流畅。

例: I didn't go to the library often when I was in high school because I was very busy. However, now that I am a university student, I spend a lot of time there studying.

提案: 回答中有语法错误（如动词单复数），且表达略显重复。建议注意语法正确性，使用连接词使表达更连贯，并避免重复。

例: I usually study in the library because it is quiet and helps me concentrate. Also, I often borrow books and study materials to help with my courses.

提案: 回答结构较好，但时态和表达上有小错误。建议注意时态一致性，使用更自然的表达方式，使回答更流畅。

例: Yes, I did. My parents encouraged me to visit the library every weekend and gave me a card to borrow books. They said that reading many stories would help me write my own stories more easily, and I believe that.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误。建议简化句子，注意语法和词汇的准确使用，使表达更自然和易懂。

例: To be honest, many Chinese children don't go to the library often because they have a lot of pressure from their studies and little free time for other interests.

× But when I become a university student, I spend a lot of time in the library.

✓ But when I became a university student, I spent a lot of time in the library.

这里描述的是过去的情况，动词时态应使用过去式。"become"和"spend"应改为过去式"became"和"spent"。

× Secondly, I always borrows some books or materials of study.

✓ Secondly, I always borrow some books or materials of study.

主语是第一人称单数"I"，动词不应加第三人称单数的-s，"borrows"应改为"borrow"。

× They told me that if I could read a lot of stories, I will write my own stories more easily.

✓ They told me that if I could read a lot of stories, I would write my own stories more easily.

这里是虚拟语气，条件句中主句应使用"would"而非"will"，表示假设的结果。

× so it is difficult for them to go to library.

✓ so it is difficult for them to go to the library.

"library"前应加定冠词"the"，表示特指图书馆。