Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and 'and those'. Also, structure your answer clearly by stating your main point first, then giving specific reasons. For example, say "Yes, I often go to the library because I work as a librarian and also like to borrow novels and reference books for my studies."

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I work there as a librarian. On my duty days, I manage book loans, and on other days, I borrow novels and reference books to help with my studies.

提案: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your speech more fluent. Use linking words such as 'also' or 'in addition' to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "On my duty days, I help with borrowing and organizing books. In addition, on other days, I borrow novels and reference books and read there because it is a good environment."

例: On my duty days, I help borrowers and organize books. In addition, on other days, I borrow novels and reference books to support my studies, and I enjoy reading there because the environment is quiet and comfortable.

提案: Try to use more formal linking words and avoid informal contractions like 'cause'. Also, clarify your answer with more specific details. For example, "Yes, I often went to the library during recess in primary school because it was a long break, giving me enough time to read books."

例: Yes, I often went to the library during recess when I was in primary school because the break was long enough for me to enjoy reading several books.

提案: Avoid repeating words like 'because' and filler words like 'umm'. Use linking words such as 'however' or 'in fact' to make your answer more coherent. Also, be more specific and concise. For example, "Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library, but in fact, children from all backgrounds visit because it provides a good study environment, especially for those who cannot focus at home."

例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library; however, children from all backgrounds visit it because it offers a quiet and conducive environment for studying, especially for those who find it hard to concentrate at home.

× As a librarian, I usually go to the library to duty and also, uh, it's, if it's not my duty day, I will also go to the library to borrow books, uh, novels and uh, reference book to do exercise, uh, and those.

✓ As a librarian, I usually go to the library to do duty and also, uh, if it's not my duty day, I will also go to the library to borrow books, uh, novels and uh, reference books to do exercises, uh, and those.

The phrase 'to duty' is incorrect because 'duty' is a noun and needs a verb to indicate the action. The correct verb phrase is 'to do duty'. Also, 'reference book' should be plural 'reference books' to match the plural 'novels' and 'exercises' should be plural to indicate multiple activities. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× On my duty days, I will help to borrow books and organize them. Besides that, if it's not my duty day, I will go to library to borrow books such as novels, reference book to help with my studies and I'll also, uh, read there 'cause umm, it's a good environment there.

✓ On my duty days, I will help to borrow books and organize them. Besides that, if it's not my duty day, I will go to the library to borrow books such as novels, reference books to help with my studies and I'll also, uh, read there 'cause umm, it's a good environment there.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library' in this context, the definite article 'the' is required. Also, 'reference book' should be plural 'reference books' to be consistent with 'novels' and the context.

× In my primary school I usually go to library during recess 'cause it's a long period of time, so I have enough time to read.

✓ In my primary school, I usually went to the library during recess 'cause it was a long period of time, so I had enough time to read.

The question is about past habits ('Did you go to the library when you were a kid?'), so the answer should be in the past tense. 'Go' should be changed to 'went', 'go to library' should be 'went to the library' with the definite article 'the', and 'it's' and 'have' should be changed to 'it was' and 'had' respectively to maintain past tense consistency.

× In my primary school I usually go to library during recess 'cause it's a long period of time, so I have enough time to read.

✓ In my primary school, I usually went to the library during recess 'cause it was a long period of time, so I had enough time to read.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the'. When referring to a specific place like 'library', the definite article 'the' is necessary. This correction improves grammatical correctness and clarity.

× Yes, they do. But not only Chinese kids go to the library. Everyone goes to the library because it's a very good source for studies and it's a very good environment to study at there 'cause, umm, because if you don't have a good environment at your home and you can try to study to focus more in the library.

✓ Yes, they do. But not only Chinese kids go to the library. Everyone goes to the library because it's a very good source for studies and it's a very good environment to study there 'cause, umm, because if you don't have a good environment at your home, you can try to study to focus more in the library.

The phrase 'to study at there' is incorrect because 'there' already indicates place, so 'at' is unnecessary and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'to study there'. Also, a comma is added after 'at your home' for clarity. This correction improves grammatical accuracy and naturalness.