Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，存在语法错误和冗余。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体理由支持。

例: No, I don't often go to the library because I find studying in my dormitory more convenient and quiet.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误和语法问题，表达不够连贯。建议使用正确词汇并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: The library has a wide variety of books, so I often go there to read. For example, I recently read 'Gone with the Wind' at my school's library, and it was fascinating.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱。建议完整表达观点，避免语法错误，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: Yes, I often went to the library as a child because my parents encouraged me to go every morning, although it was not my own choice.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够准确。建议用更准确的词汇和结构表达观点。

例: Yes, many Chinese children often visit libraries because they provide a community where kids can learn and socialize.

× go to the library is waste of time

✓ going to the library is a waste of time

动词不定式后面作主语时，应使用动名词形式。这里'go'应改为'going'。

× my school's library is a little bit so

✓ my school's library is a little small

'a little bit so'表达不正确，应使用形容词短语来描述图书馆的大小或状况。

× Laboratory is full of all variety of books

✓ The library is full of all varieties of books

'Laboratory'（实验室）用错，应为'library'（图书馆）；'all variety'应为复数形式'all varieties'。

× it's a fascinating interesting

✓ it's fascinating and interesting

'fascinating'和'interesting'都是形容词，不能直接连用，应使用连词'and'连接。

× but it's not my own intention but I also

✓ but it was not my own intention but I also went

句子中时态应与前文保持一致，描述过去的情况应使用过去时。

× because library is kind of a small, uh, society

✓ because the library is kind of a small, uh, society

特指某个图书馆时，'library'前应加定冠词'the'。

× Kids can go there and uh, uh, make friends there

✓ Kids can go there and make friends there

句子中多余的'uh'应去除，保持句子简洁。