Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 중복된 표현이 있습니다. 'Even last day I went to went to the library' 부분에서 중복된 단어를 제거하고, 문장을 더 간결하고 명확하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I really enjoy reading books. In fact, I went there just yesterday to borrow some new novels.

提案: 문법과 어휘 사용에 오류가 있으며, 문장 연결이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 'so quiet place' 대신 'a very quiet place'와 같이 정확한 표현을 사용하고, 연결어를 활용해 문장을 매끄럽게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I usually do my university homework or assignments in the library because it is a very quiet place where everyone is focused on their own tasks. Therefore, I find it very conducive to studying.

提案: 부정문 사용이 반복적이고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'hate'는 과거형 'hated'로 바꾸고, 'go library' 대신 'go to the library'를 사용해야 합니다. 또한, 문장을 더 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I really hated reading books. Going to the library felt like a nightmare to me back then.

提案: 문장이 매우 불명확하고 문법적으로 틀렸습니다. 'I never so I never seen' 부분은 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 문장을 명확하고 간결하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids in general, but personally, I have never seen Chinese children going to the library.

× Even last day I went to went to the library and I really like reading a book so I often go to the library actually.

✓ Even last day I went to the library and I really like reading books so I often go to the library actually.

'Went to went to' is a repetition error; only one 'went to' is needed. Also, 'last day' should be 'the other day' or 'recently' for naturalness, but it's not a grammar problem here. 'Like reading a book' should be 'like reading books' to express a general habit, but this is a plural issue, so corrected here for clarity.

× Actually I do homework or task in my university.

✓ Actually I do homework or tasks at my university.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to being at a place like a university; 'at' is the correct preposition. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'homework' which is uncountable but plural in meaning here.

× There are so quiet place and everyone is doing own task.

✓ There is a very quiet place and everyone is doing their own tasks.

'There are' should be 'There is' because 'place' is singular. 'So quiet place' is incorrect; it should be 'a very quiet place' to use the article and adverb properly. 'Own task' should be 'their own tasks' to agree with 'everyone' and pluralize 'task'.

× So it is very good place I think.

✓ So I think it is a very good place.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'very good place'. Also, the word order is awkward; 'I think' is better placed at the beginning or end for naturalness.

× Definitely no, because when I was young I really really hate reading a book so it was nightmare to go library.

✓ Definitely no, because when I was young I really really hated reading books so it was a nightmare to go to the library.

'Hate' should be past tense 'hated' to match 'when I was young'. 'Reading a book' should be 'reading books' for generalization. 'It was nightmare' needs the article 'a'. 'Go library' requires the preposition 'to'.

× So no, actually no.

✓ So no, actually no.

No grammatical error here; sentence is acceptable as a short negative response.

× Well, I don't know about Chinese kids, but in my case I I never so I never seen Chinese kids in library.

✓ Well, I don't know about Chinese kids, but in my case I have never seen Chinese kids in the library.

'I never seen' is incorrect; it should be 'I have never seen' for present perfect tense. 'In library' requires the article 'the' to be 'in the library'. The repeated 'I' is a typo and should be removed.