Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'look of the books' say 'look for books', and avoid repeating similar ideas.

例: Honestly, I don't go to the library very often, maybe just once or twice a month. However, when I visit the mall with my family, I usually take the opportunity to stop by the library to look for books that can help me with my course.

提案: Improve your sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly. For example, say 'because it offers' instead of 'because it's offer'. Also, add more details to enrich your answer.

例: Usually, I go to the library to find books that can help me with my course because it offers a quiet and comfortable environment, which helps me concentrate better.

提案: Use correct prepositions and verb forms, such as 'interested in reading books'. Also, try to make your answer more coherent by using linking words like 'because' and 'however' properly.

例: No, I didn't go to the library much when I was a kid because I wasn't very interested in reading books at that time. However, now I usually visit the library when I go to the mall with my family.

提案: Improve grammar by using correct verb forms and prepositions, such as 'interested in reading books'. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and add specific details.

例: I think many Chinese children do not often go to the library because not all of them are interested in reading books or stories. However, some children who enjoy reading visit the library regularly to find new books and improve their knowledge.

× Usually when I visit the mall with my family, I take the opportunity to stop by the library to look of the books.

✓ Usually when I visit the mall with my family, I take the opportunity to stop by the library to look for books.

The phrase 'look of the books' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'look for books' because 'look for' is the correct verb-preposition combination to express searching for something.

× Sorry to look for the books that can help me with my course I.

✓ Sorry, I meant to say I look for books that can help me with my course.

The original sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. It lacks a subject and verb in the correct order. The correction adds the subject 'I' and clarifies the intended meaning.

× Usually I go to the library to find books that can help me with my course because it's offer a quiet and comfortable environment.

✓ Usually I go to the library to find books that can help me with my course because it offers a quiet and comfortable environment.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'offers' (third person singular) instead of 'offer'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× No, I didn't go to the library much when I was a kid because I wasn't very interested to reading the book at that time.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library much when I was a kid because I wasn't very interested in reading books at that time.

The correct preposition after 'interested' is 'in', not 'to'. Also, 'reading the book' is better as 'reading books' to generalize the activity.

× I think many Chinese children do not often go to the library because not all of them interested to reading books or stories.

✓ I think many Chinese children do not often go to the library because not all of them are interested in reading books or stories.

The phrase 'interested to reading' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'interested in reading'. Also, the verb 'are' is needed before 'interested' for correct sentence structure.

× However, some children who enjoy reading visit library regularly to find new books and improve their knowledge.

✓ However, some children who enjoy reading visit the library regularly to find new books and improve their knowledge.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.