Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question and providing clear reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet and comfortable place where I can find books that interest me. I enjoy spending time there to relax and learn new things.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about your activities. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

例: Usually, I find books that interest me and read them carefully. After reading, I think about how the information can help me improve my knowledge and skills.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to speak more confidently and clearly. Use simple sentences and explain your experience with specific details and linking words.

例: Yes, when I was a kid, I often visited my school library. I used to choose books that interested me and think about how I could apply what I learned in real life.

提案: Your answer is somewhat confusing and lacks coherence. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically. Also, be more specific and avoid vague expressions.

例: I think many Chinese kids still go to the library, but nowadays, most prefer using the Internet because it saves time and is more convenient for finding information.

× Library is the place where you can feel comfortable yourself and you can have a quiet place and look for the interesting books of yours, interesting sphere.

✓ The library is the place where you can feel comfortable yourself and you can have a quiet place and look for your interesting books, interesting sphere.

The noun 'library' here needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'the interesting books of yours' is better expressed as 'your interesting books' for natural English usage.

× Library is the place where you can feel comfortable yourself and you can have a quiet place and look for the interesting books of yours, interesting sphere.

✓ The library is the place where you can feel comfortable and you can have a quiet place and look for your interesting books, interesting sphere.

The reflexive pronoun 'yourself' is incorrectly used here. The phrase 'feel comfortable yourself' is unnatural; it should be 'feel comfortable' without 'yourself'.

× I analyze what are they useful for for and how can I improve my knowledge for them.

✓ I analyze what they are useful for and how I can improve my knowledge from them.

The preposition 'for' is repeated unnecessarily and used incorrectly. The phrase 'improve my knowledge for them' is incorrect; 'improve my knowledge from them' or 'with them' is more appropriate.

× I analyzed after reading, umm, uh, what they wear for and how could I spend them, umm, in my real practice practice.

✓ I analyzed after reading what they were for and how I could apply them in my real practice.

The verb 'wear' is incorrect here; the correct past tense verb is 'were' to indicate purpose. Also, 'spend them' is incorrect; 'apply them' or 'use them' fits better. The phrase 'real practice practice' is redundant; one 'practice' suffices.

× I analyzed after reading, umm, uh, what they wear for and how could I spend them, umm, in my real practice practice.

✓ I analyzed after reading what they were for and how I could apply them in my real practice.

The preposition 'in' is correctly used here, but the phrase 'spend them in my real practice' is unnatural. 'Apply them in my real practice' is a better collocation.