Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中时态混乱，且表达不够自然。建议注意时态一致性，简洁表达，避免重复。

例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was in school because our exams were very difficult. I needed extra time to prepare, so studying there helped me a lot.

提案: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议使用更准确的句子结构，并用连接词使内容连贯。

例: I usually go to the library to finish my homework. After that, I review the lessons I learned in class, which helps me prepare for my final exams.

提案: 时态错误和表达不自然。建议注意时态一致，使用更地道的表达方式。

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because my father bought many books for me at home, so I could read them there without needing to visit the library.

提案: 表达重复且不流畅。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用恰当的词汇。

例: I think most kids nowadays don't often go to the library because they can use their phones to search for information online, so they don't feel the need to read physical books.

× Yes, I often go to the library when I was in school, so you know, our exam is very hard, so I need a lot of time to prepare for it.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was in school, because our exams were very hard, so I needed a lot of time to prepare for them.

这里描述的是过去的情况，应该使用过去时态。动词go应改为went，need改为needed，exam改为exams以匹配复数。

× And I go to library to study my old college curriculums and it helped me a lot.

✓ And I went to the library to study my old college curriculums and it helped me a lot.

library前缺少定冠词the，且前文描述的是过去的情况，动词go应改为went。

× As you know, I have a very hard in school, so I go to the library and finish my homework.

✓ As you know, I had a very hard time in school, so I went to the library and finished my homework.

hard后面缺少名词time，且描述过去情况，动词时态应改为过去时。

× When I finish my homework, I study the knowledge what I have learned on the class.

✓ When I finished my homework, I studied the knowledge that I had learned in class.

描述过去的动作，动词时态应为过去时。使用that替代what更合适，介词on class应改为in class。

× It helped me a lot on the final exam.

✓ It helped me a lot on the final exam.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× No, I don't go to the library.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library.

描述过去情况，否定句应使用过去时态didn't go。

× When I was a kid my father buy a lot of books in my home, so I can read them at home and I have not necessary to go to the library.

✓ When I was a kid, my father bought a lot of books for our home, so I could read them at home and I didn't need to go to the library.

buy应改为过去式bought，can改为could，have not necessary表达错误，应改为didn't need。

× Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

✓ Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× I think most of kids don't go to the library nowadays.

✓ I think most kids don't go to the library nowadays.

most of kids应改为most kids，去掉of。

× The kids have phones to go online and have and search some information, search on the search on the Internet and they have no necessary to go to the library, read a real book.

✓ The kids have phones to go online and search for some information on the Internet, so they don't need to go to the library to read a real book.

search后应加介词for，search on the Internet改为search for information on the Internet。have no necessary表达错误，应改为don't need。句子结构也做了调整使其更通顺。