Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和冠词的使用。可以多使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet and relaxing place where I can focus on reading and studying.

提案: 回答中有很多重复和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复，使用连接词使句子连贯，并注意词汇的准确使用。

例: Usually, I study and read books in the library. Sometimes, I also use the computer to draw because it is a quiet and comfortable place.

提案: 回答中时态混乱，表达不完整且不自然。建议使用正确的过去时态，简洁表达经历，并避免道歉式表达。

例: Yes, I went to the library when I was a child. However, I did not know that I had to be quiet, so I sometimes made noise.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，正确使用时态和冠词，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: Yes, Chinese children often go to the library when they are students because teachers and parents encourage them to study there.

× Yes, I often go to the library and I think this is relaxing to my reading my book and it's quite and this is a quiet space for me to study.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library and I think it is relaxing to read my book, and it is quiet. This is a quiet space for me to study.

句中“relaxing to my reading my book”表达不正确，应使用动词不定式或动名词短语来表达“放松地读书”，且“it's quite and this is a quiet space”中“quite”用法错误，应为“quiet”。建议改为“it is relaxing to read my book, and it is quiet”。

× I usually I think I'm in library, usually studying and reading books and also and and sometimes always drawing on computer and I think this is a good This is a good space for me. It is not noisy and has a heavy.

✓ I usually think that when I am in the library, I study and read books. Also, sometimes I draw on the computer. I think this is a good space for me. It is not noisy and has a heavy atmosphere.

句子结构混乱，重复使用“and and sometimes always”，且“has a heavy”不完整，缺少名词。应理清句子结构，去除多余词汇，并补充完整表达。

× Yes, but when I am a kid, but I am a children, I don't I don't know in the library we must be quiet, so I always have a noise in every. I am so sorry for this time.

✓ Yes, but when I was a kid, I didn't know that we must be quiet in the library, so I always made noise. I am sorry for that time.

描述过去的事情应使用过去时态，“when I am a kid”应改为“when I was a kid”，“I don't know”应改为“didn't know”，“I always have a noise”应改为“I always made noise”。

× Yes, I think the Chinese too often often go to library in this in when we are students because the teacher, teacher and parents also hope we go to the library to learning.

✓ Yes, I think Chinese students often go to the library when we are students because teachers and parents also hope we go to the library to learn.

“the Chinese”用法不当，应直接用“Chinese students”或“Chinese”。“too often often”重复，应去掉一个“often”。“go to library”缺少冠词，应为“go to the library”。“to learning”应改为“to learn”。