Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议直接回答问题，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和语法。

例: No, I don't go to the library often. I usually visit it only when I need to prepare for exams.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地描述在图书馆的活动，并使用连词使句子连贯。

例: I usually review my tests in the library because it has tidy desks and a quiet atmosphere, which helps me concentrate better.

提案: 回答含糊且有语法错误，表达不连贯。建议直接回答问题，避免重复，并使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

例: I don't remember going to the library often as a child, but there was one near my home.

提案: 回答中有语法和用词错误，表达不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子，准确表达观点，并避免重复。

例: Yes, many Chinese children visit libraries because they are free and provide access to books. However, some children behave noisily, so parents should supervise them.

× Not often, I didn't.

✓ Not often, I didn't go.

这里需要完整的过去时态表达，省略了动词go，导致句子不完整。应补充动词go的过去式形式。

× I think the library have a tidy and clean desks and many people study there is create a academic atmosphere is help me to concentrate on my.

✓ I think the library has tidy and clean desks, and many people studying there creates an academic atmosphere that helps me concentrate.

library是单数，动词应使用第三人称单数形式has；desks是复数，前面不需要冠词a；people是复数，study应改为studying作为现在分词；create应改为creates与主语many people studying保持一致；help应改为helps。句子结构混乱，需调整。

× I like to revealing the tests in the library.

✓ I like revealing the tests in the library.

动词like后面接动名词revealing，不需要to。

× There is a library near my home so it's decent.

✓ There is a library near my home, so it's convenient.

这里的decent用词不当，应该用convenient表示方便。

× It doesn't vary usually for me to go to robbery when I.

✓ It doesn't vary usually for me to go to the library when I was young.

句子结构混乱，'go to robbery'错误，应为'go to the library'；句子不完整，补充完整。

× because the library is free and offering offer a place there can expose to the books and the literature.

✓ because the library is free and offers a place where people can be exposed to books and literature.

offering offer重复，应用第三人称单数offers；expose to应改为be exposed to；the books和the literature前的定冠词the不必要。

× But some people, some children just running and shouting at the library.

✓ But some children just run and shout in the library.

people和children重复，去掉people；running和shouting应改为run和shout与主语一致；介词at应改为in。

× So I think their parents should keep care of them. Take care.

✓ So I think their parents should take care of them.

短语keep care of错误，应为take care of；Take care单独使用不合适。