Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but contains a grammatical error and could be more natural. Instead of "every weekends," say "every weekend." Also, try to add a bit more detail to make your answer more engaging and complete.

例: Yes, I often go to the library every weekend because I enjoy reading and studying in a quiet environment.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas more clearly and avoid filler words like "umm" and "uh." Use linking words to connect your ideas and be specific about the books you read. Also, correct phrases like "in work days" to "on weekdays."

例: On weekdays, I usually go to the library to finish my work or study. However, on weekends, I like to read novels, especially detective books such as "Snow Walls."

提案: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical errors. The phrase "I'm not really into going to the library when I was a kid" contradicts the rest of your answer. Also, use past tense consistently and avoid awkward phrasing. Try to clearly state whether you went to the library as a child and explain why.

例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid because there were not many entertainment options available, so I spent a lot of time reading books there.

提案: Your answer is generally good but has minor repetition and could be more concise. Avoid repeating words like "and and." Also, try to add a linking word to improve coherence and provide a bit more detail.

例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because reading is considered a good habit. Therefore, children are encouraged by their parents to read books there regularly.

× Yes, I go to libraries every weekends.

✓ Yes, I go to libraries every weekend.

The word 'weekends' is plural, but 'every' requires a singular noun. Therefore, 'weekends' should be changed to 'weekend' to match the singular form after 'every'.

× Umm, in work days I always go to libraries to finish my work or learn something.

✓ Umm, on work days I always go to libraries to finish my work or learn something.

The correct preposition to use with 'work days' is 'on' rather than 'in'. 'On' is used for specific days or dates.

× But in weekends whenever I always go to library to read novels and read some books, detective books such as, uh, snow walls and.

✓ But on weekends, I always go to the library to read novels and some books, detective books such as, uh, Snow Walls and others.

First, 'in weekends' should be 'on weekends' (preposition correction). 'Library' should be preceded by 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'whenever' is unnecessary and misplaced here. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Of course, I'm not really into going to the library when I was a kid because when I was a kid there's not so much entertainment equipment to use, so I always spend my time on libraries.

✓ Of course, I wasn't really into going to the library when I was a kid because there wasn't much entertainment equipment to use, so I always spent my time in libraries.

The sentence refers to past events, so present tense verbs like 'I'm', 'there's', and 'spend' should be changed to past tense: 'wasn't', 'wasn't', and 'spent'. Also, 'on libraries' should be 'in libraries' (preposition correction).

× Yes, because in China reading is always regarded as a a good habit, so children are always encouraged to read books in libraries and and their parents would appreciate it.

✓ Yes, because in China reading is always regarded as a good habit, so children are always encouraged to read books in libraries and their parents appreciate it.

The repeated 'a a' is a typo and should be corrected to a single 'a'. Also, 'would appreciate' suggests conditional mood, but here simple present 'appreciate' is more appropriate to express general truth. The repeated 'and' is also corrected.