Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些重复且表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达“definitely go”与“definitely not go”，并且注意语法，如“study”应为“studying”。可以用更自然的表达方式来说明去图书馆的频率和原因。

例: I usually go to the library about five times a week, especially when I have a lot of studying to do. However, if I don't have any urgent work, I prefer to stay at home.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“not allowed to study so efficient”应改为“not able to study efficiently”。建议使用更准确的表达，并且避免使用“scan something”这种不明确的说法。

例: I usually study in the library because it helps me concentrate. However, if I find it hard to focus, I sometimes take short breaks by browsing my phone to relax.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但表达有些生硬，如“in order to finish my tasks”可以更自然地表达为“to help me finish my homework”。“viewing these books”应改为“look at these books”。建议注意动词搭配和句子流畅度。

例: Yes, I did. My father often took me to the library to help me finish my homework. Besides that, I enjoyed looking at the colorful picture books available for children.

提案: 回答中逻辑不清且用词不当，如“naughty children would definitely like to go to the library”与常理不符。建议避免使用带有负面评价的词汇，改为更客观的描述，并且加强逻辑连贯性。

例: Yes, many Chinese children visit the library, especially on weekends with their parents. However, how often they go can depend on their interests and personalities.

× I don't think I am a person who really likes study.

✓ I don't think I am a person who really likes studying.

动词like后面接动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事，故study应改为studying。

× when it comes to my busy hours, I will definitely go to the library for my study, maybe five times a week I think.

✓ when it comes to my busy hours, I will definitely go to the library to study, maybe five times a week I think.

短语go to the library后面接动词不定式to study表示目的，不能用for my study。

× For most of the time I think I will study in the library.

✓ For most of the time, I think I will be studying in the library.

表达持续动作时，使用进行时更合适，且句中缺少逗号。

× it's a good place to help me to concentrate my mind

✓ it's a good place to help me concentrate my mind

help后面接动词原形，不需要to。

× when I am not allowed to study so efficient, I would start looking at my phone

✓ when I am not able to study so efficiently, I would start looking at my phone

efficient是形容词，修饰动词应使用副词efficiently；allowed to study不符合语境，应改为able to study。

× there are lots of vivid pictures on the book.

✓ there were lots of vivid pictures in the book.

描述过去时应使用过去时态were，且pictures在书中应用in而非on。

× So that was a good time for me to viewing these books.

✓ So that was a good time for me to view these books.

to后面应接动词原形，不能用动名词viewing。

× I often see lots of children reading books there and with their parents.

✓ I often see lots of children reading books there with their parents.

and连接两个并列成分，原句中with their parents应与前面内容并列，故去掉and。

× naughty children would definitely like to go to the library.

✓ naughty children definitely would like to go to the library.

副词definitely的位置应放在情态动词would之后，修饰情态动词。