Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating 'library' twice in one sentence and try to add a linking phrase to make it smoother.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it allows me to borrow books and broaden my horizons.

提案: Try to correct grammar errors and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about your language learning activities.

例: Actually, I usually study languages like Korean, Japanese, and English in the library because I enjoy learning new languages and practicing them regularly.

提案: Pay attention to verb tenses and article usage. Use linking words to connect contrasting ideas and make your answer more coherent.

例: No, I seldom went to the library as a kid because I wasn't interested in studying. However, as I grew up, my interest in learning increased, so I started visiting the library regularly.

提案: Improve grammar and clarity. Use more precise vocabulary and linking words to explain your opinion clearly.

例: I think so because many Chinese children work hard during their childhood and often use the library to practice and improve their skills.

× Actually, I usually learn some languages in the library such as Korean, Japanese and English because languages is a favorite thing that I want to do.

✓ Actually, I usually learn some languages in the library such as Korean, Japanese and English because languages are a favorite thing that I want to do.

The subject 'languages' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.

× No, when I was a kid I seldom go to the library because I'm not interested in studying.

✓ No, when I was a kid I seldom went to the library because I wasn't interested in studying.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a kid'), so the verbs should be in the past tense. 'Go' should be 'went' and 'I'm' should be 'I wasn't' to maintain past tense consistency.

× But when I grow up, I'm interested in studying, so I go to the library as a adult.

✓ But when I grow up, I'm interested in studying, so I go to the library as an adult.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'adult'. This is an article usage issue related to singular and plural forms.

× I think yes, because in China many Chinese kids were working hard and wants to practice hard in their childhood.

✓ I think yes, because in China many Chinese kids were working hard and want to practice hard in their childhood.

The subject 'kids' is plural, so the verb should be 'want' instead of 'wants' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.