Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of "I still doing," say "I still do it." Also, combine ideas smoothly to sound more natural.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can practice my English and read a little.

提案: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly, such as "sometimes" and "other times."

例: Sometimes, I go to the library to read quietly, and other times, I attend English lessons there to practice my reading and speaking skills.

提案: Use past tense consistently and clarify your ideas. For example, say "I was together with my friends" instead of "I have together."

例: Yes, I used to go to libraries when I was a kid. I especially enjoyed going with my school friends to practice specific activities.

提案: Improve grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words like "because" and correct verb forms, for example, "encouraged by their teachers."

例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because their teachers encourage this activity. It helps them study after school and learn more about specific topics with their friends.

× Going to a library is one of the activities that I still doing because it is a quiet spot where I can practice my English and I also stay there for reading a little bit.

✓ Going to a library is one of the activities that I am still doing because it is a quiet spot where I can practice my English and I also stay there to read a little bit.

The phrase 'I still doing' is incorrect because the verb 'doing' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'for reading' should be 'to read' to express purpose correctly.

× Sometimes I go to the library to read in a very quiet place and and another times I'm currently I'm going there to have English lessons so I can practice my reading and my speaking.

✓ Sometimes I go to the library to read in a very quiet place, and other times I'm currently going there to have English lessons so I can practice my reading and my speaking.

The phrase 'and and another times' contains a repeated conjunction and incorrect phrase 'another times'. It should be 'and other times'. Also, 'I'm currently I'm going' is redundant; 'I'm currently going' is correct.

× Yes, I used to go to libraries when I was a kid. It was an activity that I really enjoyed, especially when I have together with my friends from school and practice specific activities from the school.

✓ Yes, I used to go to libraries when I was a kid. It was an activity that I really enjoyed, especially when I was together with my friends from school and practiced specific activities from the school.

The phrase 'I have together' is incorrect; it should be 'I was together' to match past tense. Also, 'practice' should be 'practiced' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Yes, Chinese kids go to the library almost every day and I think this is an activity that is encouraged from their teachers at school. One of the main objectives is to keep studying after school hours and gathered around with their friends so they can have more knowledge for a specific topic.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids go to the library almost every day and I think this is an activity that is encouraged by their teachers at school. One of the main objectives is to keep studying after school hours and gather around with their friends so they can gain more knowledge on a specific topic.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect in 'encouraged from their teachers'; it should be 'encouraged by'. Also, 'gathered around' should be 'gather around' to match the infinitive form after 'to'. 'Have more knowledge for' should be 'gain more knowledge on' for correct collocation.