Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some redundancy and minor grammatical errors, such as "when I have a free time" and repeated words "I I". Try to be more concise and correct these errors. Also, avoid unnecessary details like the membership card unless it adds value. For example, you could say: "Yes, I often visit the library on weekends because I enjoy reading and studying in a quiet environment."

例: Yes, I often visit the library on weekends because I enjoy reading and studying in a quiet environment.

提案: Your answer shows good content but has grammatical errors such as "I loves" and "different type of books". Also, the word "psychopathy" seems out of context; perhaps you meant "psychology". Try to use correct verb forms and precise vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example: "As a physiotherapist, I enjoy reading books about psychology and exploring various scientific topics, including manual therapy and physiotherapy."

例: As a physiotherapist, I enjoy reading books about psychology and exploring various scientific topics, including manual therapy and physiotherapy.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains awkward phrases like "only hotly for one to two days" and "I really laughed." Also, avoid filler words like "Umm." Try to clarify your points and use linking words to improve coherence. For example: "Not often. When I was a child, I visited the library only occasionally with my father because there were few libraries in my country at that time."

例: Not often. When I was a child, I visited the library only occasionally with my father because there were few libraries in my country at that time.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors such as "a free access" and "different type of books." Also, the sentence "And China provide many opportunities" should be corrected. Use linking words to connect ideas better. For example: "Yes, Chinese children often visit libraries because they have free access to a wide variety of books. Moreover, China provides many opportunities for children to study and expand their knowledge."

例: Yes, Chinese children often visit libraries because they have free access to a wide variety of books. Moreover, China provides many opportunities for children to study and expand their knowledge.

× Yes, I usually go to the library, especially on weekends when I have a free time.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the library, especially on weekends when I have free time.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before 'free time' because 'free time' is an uncountable noun and does not require an article in this context.

× I also have a library membership card so I I love to visit Essex Library.

✓ I also have a library membership card, so I love to visit Essex Library.

There is a repetition of 'I' and a missing comma before 'so' which connects two independent clauses. Correcting these improves sentence clarity and structure.

× As a physiotherapist, I loves to read books that are based on psychopathy and I also love to explore different type of books related to science, umm manual therapy and physiotherapy.

✓ As a physiotherapist, I love to read books that are based on psychopathy and I also love to explore different types of books related to science, umm manual therapy and physiotherapy.

The verb 'love' should be in the base form 'love' with the subject 'I'. Also, 'different type' should be pluralized to 'different types' to agree with the plural noun 'books'.

× Not often. I still remember that when I was a kid, I used to go to a library only hotly for one to two days with my father.

✓ Not often. I still remember that when I was a kid, I used to go to the library only rarely for one to two days with my father.

The phrase 'a library' should be 'the library' because it refers to a specific library known to the speaker. Also, 'hotly' is incorrect here; 'rarely' fits the intended meaning.

× Umm, I really laughed.

✓ Umm, I really liked it.

The phrase 'I really laughed' does not fit the context. The speaker likely means they enjoyed or liked going to the library, so 'I really liked it' is more appropriate.

× I really like to go to library, but in my country at that time, there were limited libraries.

✓ I really like to go to the library, but in my country at that time, there were limited libraries.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place or concept known to both speaker and listener.

× They have a free access to go to library and explore different type of books.

✓ They have free access to go to the library and explore different types of books.

The phrase 'a free access' is incorrect because 'access' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. Also, 'different type' should be pluralized to 'different types' to agree with 'books'. Additionally, 'to library' should be 'to the library'.

× And China provide many opportunities to the children to study and explore their knowledge.

✓ And China provides many opportunities to children to study and explore their knowledge.

The verb 'provide' should be 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'China'. Also, 'the children' is incorrect here; 'children' without 'the' is more appropriate when speaking generally.