Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu tính tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it helps me save money compared to going to coffee shops. Moreover, I enjoy being surrounded by books and learning new things in a quiet environment.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sử dụng từ nối để liên kết các ý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Nội dung nên cụ thể hơn và tránh lặp từ.

例: Usually, I read books in the library and sometimes borrow my favorite ones. This way, I can learn new things while also saving money on buying books.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

例: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because my hometown was small and did not have a library. I first visited a library when I moved to the city for school.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và thiếu cấu trúc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

例: Yes, I believe Chinese kids often go to the library because many schools encourage reading, and there are plenty of libraries available in cities and towns.

× I often to go the library is save my money instead of go to the coffee shop and I feel I enjoy the the place with many knowledge of.

✓ I often go to the library to save my money instead of going to the coffee shop, and I feel I enjoy the place with a lot of knowledge.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'to go' after 'often' and lacks proper verb forms. 'Often' should be followed by the base verb 'go' without 'to'. Also, 'save' should be 'to save' to express purpose, and 'go' should be 'going' after 'instead of'. Additionally, 'many knowledge of' is incorrect; 'a lot of knowledge' is the correct phrase.

× Obviously I usually read in the library and sometime I borrow the best book I like, which I think the way in which. Learn new things with Save money.

✓ Obviously, I usually read in the library and sometimes I borrow the best books I like, which I think is a way to learn new things and save money.

The sentence has several issues: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb of frequency), 'the best book' should be plural 'books' to match general meaning, and the phrase 'which I think the way in which. Learn new things with Save money.' is fragmented and incorrect. It should be combined into a complete sentence with correct verb forms and conjunctions.

× No, when I was a kid. I live in my hometown. My hometown is poor and dumb and no more than in the city. I just. I remember the first time I go to the library is when.

✓ No, when I was a kid, I lived in my hometown. My hometown was poor and less developed than the city. I just remember the first time I went to the library.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'live' and 'is' when referring to past time. It should be 'lived' and 'was'. 'No more than in the city' is unclear and should be 'less developed than the city'. Also, 'I go' should be 'I went' to match past tense.

× Oh, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because Chinese I know that have more than and have a lot of. Favorable street so.

✓ Oh, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because I know that there are many libraries and favorable places in China.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Chinese I know that have more than and have a lot of. Favorable street so.' is incorrect. It should be rephrased to express that there are many libraries and favorable places. Also, 'libraries' should be plural to match 'many'.