List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，避免重复和冗余。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list beforehand because I tend to forget what I need to buy. This helps me stay organized and ensures I don't miss anything.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work because it helps me be more efficient. For example, I list the tasks I need to complete each day to stay organized.

提案: 回答重复且表达不流畅，建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并提供更具体的原因。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to be more spontaneous in their planning.

提案: 回答较为完整，但存在语法错误和表达不自然，建议注意时态一致性和句子简洁性。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can access them anytime, even when I'm outside. It's also convenient since I don't need to carry paper, and I can easily add or remove items.

× I always forget how I wanna buy.

✓ I always forget what I want to buy.

这里使用了错误的动词形式和表达方式。'forget how I wanna buy'不符合英语习惯，应该用'forget what I want to buy'来表达忘记买什么。建议用'what'引导宾语从句，动词用原形或不定式。

× So if I make a list before shopping so I can remember what I'm gonna buy.

✓ So if I make a list before shopping, I can remember what I'm going to buy.

句子中有重复的连词'so'，导致结构混乱。应去掉第二个'so'，并在条件状语从句后加逗号，使句子结构清晰。

× it is worse for me because it is more efficiency if I follow the list to do.

✓ It is better for me because it is more efficient if I follow the list.

'worse'和'efficiency'的使用不当。这里应使用比较级'beter'和形容词'efficient'，因为描述的是效果的好坏和效率的形容词形式。

× if I follow the list to do.

✓ if I follow the list to do tasks.

短语'to do'缺少宾语，导致表达不完整。应补充具体内容，如'tasks'，使句子完整。

× planning on this is required more of time than to organise all the stuff.

✓ Planning this requires more time than organizing all the stuff.

'planning on this'用法不当，应改为'Planning this'。'is required more of time'结构错误，应改为'requires more time'。此外，'to organise'应改为动名词形式'organizing'以保持平行结构。

× So it it is spend a lot of effort on it.

✓ So it takes a lot of effort.

'it is spend'结构错误，正确表达应为'it takes'。'spend'是动词，不能直接用被动形式。

× I usually make a list on my phone because it allows me to check it whatever I want even when I'm outside

✓ I usually make a list on my phone because it allows me to check it whenever I want, even when I'm outside.

缺少连接词'whenever'，使句子不完整。'whatever'用法不当，应改为'whenever'表示任何时候。

× since I don't have to carry extra paper when I was outside

✓ since I don't have to carry extra paper when I am outside

时态不一致，前半句是现在时，后半句不应使用过去时'was'，应使用现在时'am'。