List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议用更自然的表达方式，直接回答问题，并说明原因，避免重复和语法错误。

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget things easily and a list helps me remember everything I need.

提案: 回答不连贯且语法错误较多，表达不清楚。建议简洁明了地回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并用具体细节支持观点。

例: Yes, I often make lists for my work because I find it hard to remember all the tasks. Writing them down on paper helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important things.

提案: 回答内容不恰当且表达混乱。建议避免主观评价，给出合理的原因，并用清晰的语言表达。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to rely on their memory instead of writing things down.

提案: 回答表达不够流畅，有语法错误。建议直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并说明具体原因。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient. I always have my phone with me, but I don't usually carry a pen or paper.

× I always recommend a list when I'm shocked.

✓ I always make a list when I go shopping.

这里'shocked'是错误的单词，应该是'shopping'。另外，'recommend a list'不符合语境，应该是'make a list'。这属于词汇使用错误，但根据题目要求只纠正语法问题，故改为正确表达。

× Yeah the main reason it's I'm always forget everything so I need to memorize.

✓ Yeah, the main reason is I always forget everything, so I need to memorize.

动词'forget'在这里应使用一般现在时，且句子结构需要调整，使其语法正确。

× I would say in my perspective, it it can be worse.

✓ I would say from my perspective, it can be worse.

'in my perspective'应改为'from my perspective'，这是介词使用错误（11号问题），但根据题目只纠正语法问题，故调整句子使其通顺。

× I'm I'm I'm not too always memories in in the brain.

✓ I'm not always good at memorizing things in my brain.

'memories'是名词，句中应使用动词形式'memorize'或动名词形式'memorizing'，且句子结构需要调整。

× So I need to write it down on papers to memorize some things.

✓ So I need to write it down on paper to memorize some things.

'papers'复数形式在这里不合适，通常写在'paper'上，表示纸张的总称。

× I need to that that important things.

✓ I need to remember those important things.

句子结构不完整，缺少动词，且'that that'重复，应改为'those'指代复数名词。

× I would say they're so lazy.

✓ I would say they are so lazy.

缩写形式在口语中常用，但书面语中应使用完整形式。

× The main reason is the memorizing paper is more is more powerful than in the brain.

✓ The main reason is that writing on paper is more powerful than memorizing in the brain.

'memorizing paper'表达不清，应改为'writing on paper'，且句子结构需要调整。

× I always make a list on my phone.

✓ I always make a list on my phone.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× The main reason is it is more convenient on paper and I don't carry on a pen in my daily schedules.

✓ The main reason is it is more convenient than paper, and I don't carry a pen in my daily schedule.

'more convenient on paper'应为'more convenient than paper'，'carry on a pen'错误，应为'carry a pen'，'daily schedules'应为单数形式'daily schedule'。