List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法错误较多，影响了表达的自然性和流畅性。建议注意时态和冠词的使用，避免重复表达，同时可以用更地道的表达方式。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me save time and ensures I don't forget to buy important items.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“on the contrast”应为“on the contrary”，且句子结构不够连贯。建议学习正确的连接词用法，并简化句子结构以提高表达清晰度。

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. Without a list, I might forget what to do next.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达重复且不够简洁。建议学习如何用简洁的句子表达观点，避免重复，并注意词汇搭配，如“complicated work”应为“complicated task”。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it complicated and believe they can remember things in their minds without writing them down.

提案: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，如“if using the paperless it will easily lost”表达不清。建议注意名词和形容词的正确使用，并使句子更流畅自然。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I carry it all day, and paper lists can be easily lost or forgotten.

× I think make the list can save my times when I shopping and can ensure I don't forget to buy some important.

✓ I think making a list can save my time when I shop and can ensure I don't forget to buy some important things.

times 应为 time，time 是不可数名词，不能用复数形式。shopping 应用动词原形 shop。some important 后面缺少名词，需补充 things。

× I think make the list can save my times when I shopping and can ensure I don't forget to buy some important.

✓ I think making a list can save my time when I shop and can ensure I don't forget to buy some important things.

动词 think 后接动名词 making，表示习惯性动作。shopping 应改为动词原形 shop。

× I think make the list can save my times when I shopping and can ensure I don't forget to buy some important.

✓ I think making a list can save my time when I shop and can ensure I don't forget to buy some important things.

shopping 应用一般现在时动词 shop，表示习惯性动作。

× if I don't make a list, I will don't know what to do next and can make my work organized.

✓ if I don't make a list, I won't know what to do next and can't make my work organized.

情态动词 will 后不加助动词 do，否定形式为 won't know。can 后应加否定形式 can't。

× I think the people who don't like making lists because they think it's a complicated work and they think it's unnecessary, they can remind things on their mind in their mind.

✓ I think the people who don't like making lists do so because they think it's complicated work and unnecessary; they can remember things in their mind.

because 前缺少谓语动词，需加 do so。work 是不可数名词，前面不加冠词 a。remind 用错，应为 remember。重复使用 in their mind 应简化。

× they can remind things on their mind in their mind.

✓ they can remember things in their mind.

动词 remember 搭配介词 in their mind，on their mind 用法不当。

× I think it's a complicated work and they think it's unnecessary,

✓ I think it's complicated work and they think it's unnecessary,

work 是不可数名词，前面不加不定冠词 a。

× if using the paperless it will easily lost and forget to take.

✓ if using paperless methods, it will easily be lost and forgotten to take.

paperless 应用作形容词修饰名词，需补充名词 methods。lost 应为被动形式 be lost，forget 应为过去分词 forgotten。

× if using the paperless it will easily lost and forget to take.

✓ if using paperless methods, they will easily be lost and forgotten to take.

lost 和 forget 需用被动语态，且主语应为复数 they 指代物品。