List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为混乱。建议注意时态和词汇的正确使用，避免重复和冗余，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because I might forget important items otherwise. Making a list helps me stay organized and ensures I don't miss anything.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to be flexible. For example, if I plan my tasks but my boss asks me to do something urgent, I need to adjust my schedule.

提案: 回答中存在语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇，简洁明了地表达原因，并注意句子结构。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer a flexible lifestyle. They may feel that lists restrict their freedom or are not useful for their way of working.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够清晰，存在语法错误。建议简化句子，注意主谓一致和时态，表达更自然。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. Paper lists are easy to lose, and I might forget to bring them along.

× I think my memory may lost something important when I want to show when I go to shopping.

✓ I think my memory may lose something important when I want to show when I go shopping.

这里“may lost”错误地使用了过去式“lost”，应使用动词原形“lose”与情态动词“may”搭配。情态动词后面应接动词原形。

× when I want to show when I go to shopping.

✓ when I want to show when I go shopping.

短语“go to shopping”中“to”是不必要的，正确表达是“go shopping”。

× So I think make a list is very necessary before shopping.

✓ So I think making a list is very necessary before shopping.

“make a list”作为主语时应使用动名词形式“making a list”。

× I think make a list for my work, maybe may make my walk into a into a shape, but I prefer a flexible work.

✓ I think making a list for my work may help make my work into a shape, but I prefer flexible work.

“make a list”应改为动名词“making a list”；“my walk”应为“my work”；“a flexible work”中“work”不可数，去掉冠词“a”。

× maybe may make my walk into a into a shape

✓ may help make my work into a shape

“maybe may”重复使用情态动词，应简化为“may help”。

× if I make a plan for my work and the boss called me to do something else that I need to.

✓ if I make a plan for my work and the boss calls me to do something else, I need to.

句子结构不完整，时态不一致，应将“called”改为现在时“calls”，并补充完整句子。

× they may like more flexible life, which they don't need least to make their life into a shape,

✓ they may like a more flexible life, so they don't need at least to make their life into a shape,

“least”应为“at least”，且句子连接词用“so”更合适。

× and they may also think that mist is don't useful on them, for they may count work as the list.

✓ and they may also think that lists aren't useful to them, because they may count work as the list.

“mist”应为“lists”，“is don't”语法错误，应为“aren't”；“on them”应为“to them”。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because nowadays smartphone become more and more important,

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because nowadays smartphones become more and more important,

“smartphone”应为复数“smartphones”，主语复数时谓语动词也应改为复数形式“become”。

× smartphone become more and more important,

✓ smartphones become more and more important,

主语为复数“smartphones”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“become”。

× I always take my phone to almost anywhere but I can't take.

✓ I always take my phone almost everywhere, but I can't take paper.

“take my phone to almost anywhere”表达不自然，应改为“take my phone almost everywhere”；“but I can't take”后缺少宾语，应补充“paper”。

× But I may forget to take the paper with me and that's the reason paper are easy to lost.

✓ But I may forget to take paper with me and that's the reason paper is easy to lose.

“paper”不可数名词，谓语动词应为单数“is”；“lost”应为动词原形“lose”。