List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免语法错误，并且回答时直接回应问题。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to browse around and enjoy the experience.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达不清的问题，建议使用更准确的句子结构，并且用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and manage my time efficiently, which improves my productivity.

提案: 表达不清晰且语法错误较多，建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用连接词。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time to prepare in advance, and they prefer to be spontaneous.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子结构。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, whereas I might not have paper handy, so using my phone is more convenient.

× No, I don't like to make a list when I shop because I don't arrange me to do things.

✓ No, I don't like to make a list when I shop because I don't arrange myself to do things.

这里的反身代词使用错误，应该用'reflective pronoun' myself 来表示动作反射到自己。

× I like surrounding in the shop.

✓ I like being around in the shop.

动词'surrounding'用法错误，应该用'being around'表示喜欢在商店周围。

× Yes, I will make a list for my work. It is effective because it can help me to know how I can do this thing and want to do this thing so I can arrange my time well.

✓ Yes, I will make a list for my work. It is effective because it can help me know how to do this thing and what I want to do so I can arrange my time well.

句中'help me to know how I can do this thing and want to do this thing'结构不正确，应该简化为'help me know how to do this thing and what I want to do'。

× It will help my board better.

✓ It will help my work better.

'my board'用词错误，应该是'my work'，表示帮助工作更好。

× I think some people maybe think make list.

✓ I think some people maybe think making a list is unnecessary.

句子结构不完整，缺少动名词和宾语，应该用'making a list'作为主语。

× But someone don't like to do it so it can't like making list.

✓ But some people don't like to do it so they don't like making lists.

'someone'应为'some people'，且句子结构不完整，需改为完整表达。

× I prefer to make list on my phone because my phone I will take it by myself in every time.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry my phone with me.

句子中'phone I will take it by myself in every time'表达不自然，应该用'I always carry my phone with me'。

× But I may not have a paper if I want to make a list.

✓ But I may not have paper if I want to make a list.

'a paper'错误，纸张不可数名词，不能加冠词'a'。

× So I think make list of my phone is convenient.

✓ So I think making lists on my phone is convenient.

动名词形式错误，应该用'making lists'，且介词用'on'表示在手机上。