List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了做购物清单的原因，但句子结构不完整，且有语法错误。建议注意句子完整性，避免语法错误，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need. Moreover, it prevents me from buying unnecessary items, so I can save money.

提案: 回答不够清晰，句子结构混乱，且出现了不相关的问题。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并提供具体细节说明清单的作用。

例: Yes, I make a list before starting work because it helps me organize my tasks and stay focused throughout the day.

提案: 表达重复且语法错误较多。建议避免重复，使用更准确的词汇和句式，清楚说明原因。

例: Some people dislike making lists because it takes extra time and effort, which can be tiring for them.

提案: 回答基本表达了偏好，但句子结构不够自然，且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并适当扩展理由。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing them down helps me remember better, and I can see everything clearly at a glance.

× it can help me remember what I need and not by unnecessary things.

✓ it can help me remember what I need and not buy unnecessary things.

这里的错误是单复数问题，'unnecessary things' 是复数，但前面的动词用错了，应该用 'buy' 而不是 'by'，这是拼写错误导致的语法错误。建议注意动词拼写，确保表达正确。

× I can save my money and.

✓ I can save my money.

句子结构错误，'and' 后面没有内容，导致句子不完整。建议避免使用不完整的连接词，确保句子完整。

× I must make a list before I want to work because it can help me.

✓ I must make a list before I work because it can help me.

这里 'must' 和 'before I want to work' 搭配不当，'before I want to work' 不符合英语习惯，应该用 'before I work'。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达方式。

× What you can tell me what I do?

✓ Can you tell me what I should do?

句子结构错误，疑问句语序错误，应该使用助动词 'can' 放在主语前面。建议学习疑问句的正确语序。

× What should I do?

✓ What should I do?

该句无语法错误，无需修改。

× Because making it needs more time and it is very tired to people.

✓ Because making it takes more time and is very tiring for people.

'needs more time' 语法正确，但 'it is very tired to people' 错误，'tired' 是形容词，应该用现在分词 'tiring' 来表示使人感到疲劳。建议区分形容词和现在分词的用法。

× I think some people don't like making this because they are so tired.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they are so tired.

'making this' 指代不明确，应该用复数名词 'lists' 来明确指代。建议注意代词和名词的一致性。

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I think write my list on paper is good for me.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I think writing my list on paper is good for me.

'I think write' 语法错误，动词 'write' 应该用动名词形式 'writing'。建议注意动词形式的正确使用。

× I can see it very clearly.

✓ I can see it very clearly.

该句无语法错误，无需修改。