List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，使表达更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to be absent-minded. Having a checklist helps me stay focused and organized.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯，建议使用完整句子并注意时态和单复数，提升表达的准确性和连贯性。

例: Yes, I definitely make lists for my work to stay organized and focused on my tasks. I usually use digital apps that send me notifications so I don't forget anything.

提案: 回答表达不清晰且语法错误较多，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的语法和词汇，使表达更准确自然。

例: Well, I think some people find making lists time-consuming and prefer to spend that time doing tasks directly.

提案: 回答未完整，且表达不够连贯，建议完整表达观点，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并避免重复。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient. I can add or edit items anytime and anywhere, which is very helpful. I usually use apps designed for this purpose.

× Yeah, are usually I do shopping list when I go to the shopping because I'm that person who absent minded and.

✓ Yeah, I usually make a shopping list when I go shopping because I'm that kind of person who is absent-minded.

这里'shopping list'应该用单数形式，且句子结构混乱，'are usually I do'不符合英语语序，应改为'I usually make'。另外，'absent minded'应加连字符，且缺少动词'is'。

× Yeah, I usually make a shopping list when I go to the shopping because I'm that person who absent minded and.

✓ Yeah, I usually make a shopping list when I go shopping because I'm that kind of person who is absent-minded.

'go to the shopping'中的'to the'是不必要的，正确表达是'go shopping'。

× Yeah, are usually I do shopping list when I go to the shopping because I'm that person who absent minded and.

✓ Yeah, I usually make a shopping list when I go shopping because I'm that kind of person who is absent-minded.

句子结构混乱，主语和谓语顺序错误，且句尾'and'后无内容，需调整为完整句子。

× Yeah, definitely. I do a list for my work.

✓ Yeah, definitely. I make a list for my work.

'do a list'用法不当，正确表达应为'make a list'。

× Usually I use digital apps that remind me and sent not notifications to not forget.

✓ Usually I use digital apps that remind me and send notifications so I don't forget.

'sent not notifications to not forget'语法错误，'sent'应为'send'，且否定表达不正确，应改为'send notifications so I don't forget'。

× Well, I think most of the individuals think that list making it's time consuming and they're rather prefer a spend this time on.

✓ Well, I think most individuals think that list making is time-consuming and they would rather spend this time on...

'they're rather prefer a spend'结构错误，应为'they would rather spend'，且'it's'应为'is'。

× Well, I think most of the individuals think that list making it's time consuming and they're rather prefer a spend this time on. Doing task straightly.

✓ Well, I think most individuals think that list making is time-consuming and they would rather spend this time doing tasks directly.

'Doing task straightly'表达不自然，'straightly'不是常用副词，应改为'doing tasks directly'。

× So I prefer To Do List on my phone because for me it's more convenient.

✓ So I prefer to make a to-do list on my phone because for me it's more convenient.

'prefer To Do List on my phone'缺少动词，应为'prefer to make a to-do list'。

× Also you can add, edit or add some items anytime and anywhere which is really helpful.

✓ Also, you can add or edit some items anytime and anywhere, which is really helpful.

重复使用'add'，应去掉一个，且句子中缺少逗号以分隔定语从句。