List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强句子结构的准确性和逻辑连贯性，避免重复和多余的词汇。可以尝试用简单明了的句子表达购物列清单的原因和好处。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy. When I go to the supermarket, it prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不完整，句子不连贯。建议练习完整句子的表达，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并具体说明列清单如何帮助提高工作效率。

例: Yes, I often make a list for my work. It helps me complete tasks one by one and arrange my work more efficiently.

提案: 回答内容不清晰，语法和词汇错误较多，建议先理清思路，使用简单句表达观点，说明为什么有些人不喜欢列清单。

例: Some people do not like making lists because they find it boring or they prefer to do things spontaneously without planning.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，建议注意时态一致性和句子完整性，使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient. Whenever I need to check my list, I can easily open the app on my phone.

× Because I need to now what I need to buy.

✓ Because I need to know what I need to buy.

这里的 'now' 是拼写错误，正确的词应该是 'know'，表示“知道”。拼写错误导致句子意思不明确。

× Or when I come to the supermarket and it is a good habit for me and it can tell me that something which is I didn't needn't.

✓ Or when I come to the supermarket, it is a good habit for me and it can tell me something that I don't need.

句子结构混乱，'didn't needn't' 是错误的双重否定，应改为 'don't need'。此外，去掉多余的 'which is' 使句子更通顺。

× And it. Often work because I can do my work in turn and in how they.

✓ And it often works because I can do my work in turn and in order.

'it' 是单数，动词应为 'works'，且 'in how they' 不合适，改为 'in order' 表示按顺序。

× I can arrange my work. More efficiency.

✓ I can arrange my work more efficiently.

'efficiency' 是名词，句中需要副词修饰动词 'arrange'，应使用副词 'efficiently'。

× Am I a penny and there are some people or horse NBTI? Is P at?

✓ I am not sure, but there are some people or those with NBTI, is that?

原句语义不清，推测想表达“我不确定，但有些人或者那些有NBTI的人，是吗？”，需要调整代词和句子结构。

× They cannot. Had this habit to my plans.

✓ They cannot have this habit of making plans.

'Had' 用法错误，应使用 'have'，且 'to my plans' 不合适，改为 'of making plans'。

× They often do some things in the floor and they do something more. Aranda.

✓ They often do some things on the floor and do something more around.

介词 'in the floor' 应为 'on the floor'，'Aranda' 可能是 'around' 的误拼。

× I preferred to make list on my phone because it is really a full accessible for me to use it.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is really fully accessible for me to use it.

'preferred' 是过去式，语境应使用一般现在时 'prefer'。'a full accessible' 结构错误，应为副词 'fully accessible'。

× I preferred to make list on my phone because it is really a full accessible for me to use it.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is really fully accessible for me to use it.

'list' 前缺少冠词 'a'，应为 'a list'。

× Anytime I need to look at it, I can put up my phone and. Turn on my applications for it.

✓ Anytime I need to look at it, I can take out my phone and turn on my applications for it.

'put up my phone' 用法不当，正确表达应为 'take out my phone'。