List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Постарайтесь использовать правильные времена и более ясные формулировки, чтобы ответ был естественным и понятным.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and improves my efficiency.

提案: Ответ содержит повторения и нечеткие фразы. Используйте связующие слова и стройте предложения более логично, чтобы сделать ответ более связным и понятным.

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and increases my productivity. Therefore, I can say that it definitely works.

提案: Ваш ответ неясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь выражать мысли более четко и использовать связующие слова для логичности.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it takes too much time and prefer to act spontaneously, believing that shopping without planning is easier.

提案: Ответ содержит нечеткие выражения и грамматические ошибки. Используйте более точные слова и стройте предложения логично, чтобы ответ был понятным и естественным.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me, allowing me to edit or add tasks anytime, which helps me stay productive and not forget important things.

× Yes I'm at least when I shopping it helps me to be organized and refused.

✓ Yes, at least when I am shopping, it helps me to be organized and focused.

The verb 'shopping' should be used with the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense 'I am shopping'. Also, 'refused' is incorrect here; likely the intended word is 'focused'.

× It's improved my productivity shopping for my. Uh, for my mental skill?

✓ It has improved my productivity when shopping and my mental skills.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'It's improved' should be 'It has improved' for present perfect tense. 'Shopping for my' is incomplete; adding 'when shopping' clarifies the meaning. 'Mental skill' should be plural 'mental skills'.

× Yes, I always try to make a list for my work because it helped me stay organized and improve my productivity.

✓ Yes, I always try to make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and improve my productivity.

The sentence mixes present tense 'try' with past tense 'helped'. Since the action is habitual, present tense 'helps' is appropriate.

× So UM, does it work? Yes, it does work. I can definitely say that 'cause it helps, not.

✓ So, um, does it work? Yes, it does. I can definitely say that because it helps.

The phrase 'it does work' is acceptable but 'it does' is more natural. The phrase 'because it helps, not' is incomplete and unclear; removing 'not' clarifies the meaning.

× Some people don't like, uh, making list because they think it can have so many time and so they get this thing that it be more.

✓ Some people don't like, uh, making lists because they think it can take so much time and they feel it is more difficult.

'Making list' should be plural 'making lists'. 'So many time' is incorrect; 'so much time' is correct for uncountable noun 'time'. The sentence is also incomplete and needs restructuring for clarity.

× Difficult so they seeing spontaneously.

✓ Difficult, so they prefer seeing spontaneously.

'They seeing' is incorrect; it should be 'they prefer seeing' or 'they shop spontaneously'. The verb needs to be in present tense with appropriate auxiliary or main verb.

× Shopping is better than planning.

✓ Shopping spontaneously is better than planning.

The sentence is grammatically correct but adding 'spontaneously' clarifies the meaning in context.

× I prefer making list on my phone because fun is everything, every time, every moment with me, so I can uh, edit or add some tasks at the moment and it helps me be so productive and don't end it when forgetting important tasks.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because my phone is always with me, so I can edit or add tasks at any moment, and it helps me be productive and not forget important tasks.

'Making list' should be plural 'making lists'. 'Fun is everything' is unclear; likely intended 'my phone is always with me'. 'Don't end it when forgetting' is incorrect; 'not forget' is correct.