List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более естественным и структурированным. Избегайте повторений и используйте связующие слова для логичности. Например, начните с утверждения, затем объясните причину и добавьте пример.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget things easily. Therefore, having a list helps me stay organized and ensures I don't miss anything important.

提案: Ответ неполный и нечеткий. Следует дать более развернутый ответ с использованием связующих слов и конкретных деталей. Избегайте незавершенных предложений.

例: I sometimes make lists for my work, but I prefer to keep my plans in my mind because I find it more effective for me. However, I realize that lists can help with complex tasks.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Следует использовать правильные конструкции и связующие слова для ясности и логичности.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find them ineffective and prefer to remember their plans mentally. However, I believe writing plans down helps me stay organized.

提案: Ответ содержит непонятные фразы и грамматические ошибки. Следует отвечать прямо, использовать связующие слова и объяснять причины выбора.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and I don't have to carry paper everywhere. This way, I can easily update my list anytime.

× Yes, I usually use a list when I'm shopping because I'm a person who forgot everything.

✓ Yes, I usually use a list when I'm shopping because I'm a person who forgets everything.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'forgets' is correct to match the subject 'a person' and the habitual context.

× I think that a list is very comfortable for people. They forgot everything.

✓ I think that a list is very convenient for people. They forget everything.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense but should be present tense 'forget' to describe a general truth. Also, 'comfortable' is incorrect here; 'convenient' is the appropriate adjective for usefulness.

× Yes, but not a lot because I think it doesn't work very well and it's better to remember my plans in my mind. And.

✓ Yes, but not a lot because I think it doesn't work very well and it's better to remember my plans in my mind.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'And.' which is incomplete and unnecessary. Removing it improves sentence structure and clarity.

× some people don't like making lists because it's not very effective for them and they prefer keep their plans in their mind.

✓ some people don't like making lists because it's not very effective for them and they prefer to keep their plans in their mind.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to keep' rather than the bare verb 'keep'.

× But for me it's better to write their plans on a list.

✓ But for me it's better to write my plans on a list.

The pronoun 'their' is inconsistent with 'for me'; it should be 'my' to match the speaker's perspective.

× Are you above of Sam? But more I prefer make a list on my phone because it's more useful and it's effective because I don't want to take the paper for everywhere and it's hard for me.

✓ Are you a friend of Sam? But I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more useful and effective since I don't want to carry paper everywhere and it's hard for me.

'Are you above of Sam?' is incorrect; likely intended 'Are you a friend of Sam?'. Also, 'prefer make' should be 'prefer to make'. 'Take the paper for everywhere' should be 'carry paper everywhere'. These corrections fix preposition and verb form errors and improve clarity.