List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法和词汇错误较多，表达不清晰。建议练习简单句型，确保句子完整且逻辑清楚。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and avoid unnecessary purchases.

提案: 回答内容不明确，句子结构混乱，难以理解。建议学习如何用简单句表达观点，并用连接词组织句子。

例: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work because it helps me finish tasks on time and stay organized.

提案: 回答语法错误严重，表达不连贯，缺乏具体内容。建议多练习表达原因的句型，并使用连接词使句子流畅。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time and they prefer to work spontaneously.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议练习完整句子表达偏好，并说明理由。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me and I can easily update my list anytime.

× Yes, I open make a list where my one my shop be 'cause it is very important thing to our life.

✓ Yes, I often make a list when I go shopping because it is a very important thing in our life.

这里'shop'应为复数形式'shopping'，表示购物活动；'thing'前应加冠词'a'，表示一个重要的事情；'to our life'应改为'in our life'，表示在我们的生活中。

× It's avoiding me too.

✓ It helps me avoid it too.

'avoiding me too'表达不正确，应使用动词不定式结构'helps me avoid'来表达帮助避免的意思。

× Excess is the badging.

✓ Excess is a bad thing.

'badging'不是正确的单词，应改为'bad thing'表示坏事。

× I over make a list for my job because it took him we.

✓ I often make a list for my job because it helps me.

'over make'应为'often make'表示经常做；'took him we'无意义，应改为'helps me'表示帮助我。

× Invasion say to finish your work and getting too.

✓ It helps me to finish my work and get it done too.

'Invasion say'无意义，应改为'It helps me'；'getting too'应改为'get it done too'，表示完成工作。

× Becauses making lenses mechanism is very.

✓ Because making lists is very important.

'lenses mechanism'错误，应为'lists'；句子不完整，补充'important'使句子完整。

× Excessive work people have done, people don't have time to do.

✓ Because people have too much work to do, they don't have time to make lists.

句子结构混乱，重组句子表达因工作太多而无时间做列表。

× And if we don't? Finishes are laced with you boring over said. Bring.

✓ And if we don't finish, we will feel bored and overwhelmed.

原句无意义，重组句子表达如果不完成任务会感到无聊和压力大。

× I prefer to make a little Oh my phone be cause.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because

'make a little'应为'make a list'；'Oh'无意义，应去掉。

× The phone is all the time in my side.

✓ The phone is always by my side.

'in my side'应改为'by my side'，表示手机总是在我身边。

× Meanwhile. The phone cannot me to finish with the latest.

✓ Meanwhile, the phone helps me to keep up with the latest.

原句结构混乱，'cannot me to finish'错误，应改为'helps me to keep up'表示帮助跟上最新信息。

× And also. Making list.

✓ And also, making lists is convenient.

句子不完整，补充谓语使句子完整，表达制作列表也很方便。