List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, nhiều từ không chính xác và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember what I need and saves time.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, giải thích rõ ràng về việc bạn có sử dụng danh sách công việc và hiệu quả của nó.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work every day. It helps me organize my tasks and manage my time better.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và không liên quan đến câu hỏi. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách, sử dụng câu đơn giản và từ vựng phù hợp.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to remember things naturally.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng bị lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng và giải thích lý do bạn thích dùng điện thoại để làm danh sách.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily check or edit them anytime, anywhere.

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✓ Yes, I do. I think making a list when I go shopping is an important thing I have to do before I go to the shop because it helps me be more convenient and choose what is suitable.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure errors, including unclear subject references and awkward phrasing. The phrase 'Michael is when I go shopping' is incorrect and unclear. Also, 'helped me convenient, more inconvenient' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'helps me be more convenient'. The sentence needs to be restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, Michael is for in my work is the most Burton I have to do because I often make a tool is in every day to organize my schedule and save time. It helped me to organize one thing I have to do an.

✓ Yes, making a list for my work is the most important thing I have to do because I often use a tool every day to organize my schedule and save time. It helps me organize the tasks I have to do.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect phrases such as 'Michael is for in my work' and 'make a tool is in every day'. These are likely mispronunciations or errors. The sentence structure is confusing and needs to be corrected to clearly express the idea of making lists to organize work tasks.

× I think so because they believed that make English is UM tech along time an it don't company and for them an. Uhm, yes.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they believe it takes a long time and is not helpful for them.

The original sentence is unclear and contains many errors, including incorrect verb forms and unclear phrases like 'make English is UM tech along time an it don't company'. The corrected sentence simplifies and clarifies the intended meaning.

× I preferred to make collision my phone because it is more convenient for me when it go out or stay home. I also I can also tickle is an can organize my schedule.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient for me when I go out or stay home. I can also tick items and organize my schedule.

The original sentence uses 'preferred' which is past tense, but the context suggests a present preference, so 'prefer' is correct. Also, 'make collision my phone' and 'tickle is an' are incorrect phrases likely due to mispronunciation or transcription errors. The sentence is corrected for tense and clarity.