List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 答えが不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。"wrist"や"Seat"などの単語の誤用を避け、簡潔で正確な表現を心がけましょう。また、文のつながりが不明瞭なので、論理的に話を展開する練習が必要です。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything I need to buy.

提案: 単語の誤用（"artist"や"Tarrant"）が多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。正しい単語を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが重要です。また、理由を明確に述べることで説得力が増します。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work tasks, and it helps me stay organized because I can see what I need to complete.

提案: 内容が非常に不明瞭で、意味が伝わりません。理由を明確にし、簡単な文で説明する練習が必要です。例えば、リスト作りが面倒だと感じる人がいることを述べると良いでしょう。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and is not useful.

提案: 単語の誤用や文の構造が不自然で、意味が伝わりにくいです。"artist"や"rest"の誤用を避け、好みの理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is faster and more convenient than using paper.

× Yes, I make wrist when I go to the shop.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go to the shop.

The word 'wrist' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'list'. Also, 'list' is a countable noun and requires an article 'a' before it in this context.

× An list is needed for me because I forgot the thing I have to buy in the shop.

✓ A list is needed for me because I forget the things I have to buy in the shop.

The article 'An' is incorrect before a word starting with a consonant sound; it should be 'A'. Also, 'forgot' should be 'forget' to match the present tense context, and 'thing' should be plural 'things' because multiple items are implied.

× So I bring my. Seat.

✓ So I bring it with me.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Seat' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is likely 'list' or 'it'. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× Yes, I make artist for my work and when I have to finish my. Tarrant I. Make a list and it works for me because it reminds me what I have to do.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work and when I have to finish my tasks, I make a list and it works for me because it reminds me what I have to do.

'Artist' is incorrect; the correct word is 'a list'. 'Tarrant' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'tasks'. Also, 'a list' requires the article 'a'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I think many people think it is. It is. Meaningless. Come make wrist. Needs to set time to make so people don't have. Too right?

✓ I think many people think it is meaningless to make lists. It needs time to make, so people don't want to do it, right?

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect words like 'wrist' instead of 'lists'. Pronouns and sentence structure are corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I prefer make artist. Fun on the phone. Turn on the paper because when I. I make a rest on the phone. It is shorter than. On the paper in my leg.

✓ I prefer to make lists on the phone rather than on paper because when I make a list on the phone, it is shorter than on paper in my hand.

'Artist' should be 'lists'. The verb 'prefer' requires 'to' before the verb 'make'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'In my leg' is incorrect; likely intended 'in my hand' or 'with me'.