List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. Instead of 'go to shopping', say 'go shopping'. Also, add a bit more detail to make your answer effective and natural.

例: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping to ensure I don't forget anything important.

提案: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and add supporting details using linking words. For example, explain how making a list helps you manage your tasks.

例: Yes, I make a list of my work tasks every day because it helps me stay organized and complete all my work efficiently.

提案: Your answer is confusing and does not address the question properly. Avoid irrelevant or incorrect information. Try to give a clear reason why some people dislike making lists, using simple and correct English.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember things in their mind and find lists unnecessary.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to complete your sentence and explain your preference clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient and I don't have to worry about losing a paper list.

× Yes, I make a list before I go to shopping.

✓ Yes, I make a list before I go shopping.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect because 'go' is followed directly by the gerund form 'shopping' without the preposition 'to'. The correct form is 'go shopping'. This is a common error in English preposition usage.

× Yes, I make a list of my work and I should do with my all of the work.

✓ Yes, I make a list of my work and I should do all of my work.

The phrase 'I should do with my all of the work' is incorrect. The pronoun 'my' should come before 'all of the work' to indicate possession correctly. Also, 'do with' is unnecessary here. The correct sentence is 'I should do all of my work.' This corrects the pronoun placement and removes unnecessary words.

× Some people do not like America is because they have sharp minded and they learn all the important thing for shopping.

✓ Some people do not like making lists because they are sharp-minded and learn all the important things for shopping.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'do not like America is because' is incorrect and confusing; 'sharp minded' should be hyphenated as 'sharp-minded'; 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'all the important'; and the sentence structure is awkward. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects grammar and structure.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone will cause so many times I lose. A paper list and.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because many times I lose a paper list.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses 'will cause' incorrectly. The phrase 'will cause so many times I lose' is ungrammatical. The correct conjunction is 'because' to explain the reason. Also, the sentence is completed properly to convey the intended meaning.