List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在错误，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用简单明了的语言表达。

例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I already know what I want to buy before I go to the store.

提案: 回答中有很多不连贯和无意义的词句，建议使用完整句子，清晰表达观点，并提供具体理由。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me prepare everything and stay organized.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议用完整句子表达原因，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work casually and feel that lists are unnecessary.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议用完整句子表达不同情况的偏好，并使用连接词。

例: It depends. If I prepare for my study, I prefer to make a list on paper. But if I plan for future travel, I use my phone because it is very convenient.

× I think I usually don't make a list one shot because I will.

✓ I think I usually don't make a list at once because I will.

这里的表达不清晰，'one shot' 应该改为 'at once'，表示一次性完成。虽然这不是严格的语法错误，但更符合英语习惯。

× I will know what I would like to buy before I will go to the shop.

✓ I will know what I would like to buy before I go to the shop.

在时间状语从句中，表示将来的动作通常用一般现在时，而不是将来时，所以 'before I will go' 应改为 'before I go'。

× I like to. Prepare everything and. Take me to his family.

✓ I like to prepare everything and take it to my family.

原句断句不当，且 'Take me to his family' 语义不清，应改为 'take it to my family'，使句子完整且符合语境。

× Maybe these people prefer to. Working on. Doing something so casually.

✓ Maybe these people prefer working on doing something so casually.

'prefer to. Working on.' 断句错误，'prefer' 后应接动名词或不定式，且不应断句。这里应改为 'prefer working on'。

× And so they don't need. Making list.

✓ And so they don't need to make a list.

'need' 后接动词时应使用不定式 'to make'，而不是动名词 'making'。

× It depends if for. Is prepare for my study.

✓ It depends if it is prepared for my study.

原句结构混乱，'if for. Is prepare for' 不符合语法，应改为 'if it is prepared for'。

× If I make a nest for my traveling in the future, I will make it on my phone 'cause that is very convenient.

✓ If I make a list for my traveling in the future, I will make it on my phone because that is very convenient.

'make a nest' 应为 'make a list'，且 'traveling' 作为不可数名词时不加冠词。这里应改为 'make a list for my travel' 或 'make a list for my traveling'。