List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议练习简单句型，确保句子结构完整，避免重复和语法错误。

例: I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I like to browse freely and buy whatever I want at the moment.

提案: 回答缺乏清晰的结构和具体细节，表达不流畅。建议先明确职位和职责，再说明列清单的具体内容和效果。

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work. As a community manager, I list the tasks I need to complete and the people I need to contact each week, which helps me stay organized.

提案: 表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议用简单句表达观点，说明原因并举例。

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel life is too busy and unpredictable, so lists don't help them.

提案: 回答简短且断断续续，语法错误影响理解。建议用完整句子表达偏好，并说明原因。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is simple and convenient, and it saves me time.

× I you should I didn't make the list when I go to the shop because I like free to go to the shop and the buy something I want late.

✓ I didn't make a list when I go to the shop because I like to freely go to the shop and buy something I want later.

句中 'free to go' 用法不正确，应使用不定式 'to freely go' 来表达自由地去商店的意思。动词不定式用法更符合语法规则。

× I you should I didn't make the list when I go to the shop because I like free to go to the shop and the buy something I want late.

✓ I didn't make a list when I go to the shop because I like to freely go to the shop and buy something I want later.

句中 'the list' 应改为 'a list'，因为这里指的是泛指的购物清单，不是特指某一张清单。

× I you should I didn't make the list when I go to the shop because I like free to go to the shop and the buy something I want late.

✓ I didn't make a list when I go to the shop because I like to freely go to the shop and buy something I want later.

句中 'I go to the shop' 用现在时，但前面有过去时 'didn't make'，时态不一致，应保持时态一致。

× Yes, I usually make a list for my job. I am the community managers, so I should at least a, uh, what should I do? And this week I should talk with who or somebody.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my job. I am a community manager, so I should at least know what I should do. And this week I should talk with someone.

'community managers' 应为单数 'community manager'，因为主语是单数 'I'。

× Yes, I usually make a list for my job. I am the community managers, so I should at least a, uh, what should I do? And this week I should talk with who or somebody.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my job. I am a community manager, so I should at least know what I should do. And this week I should talk with someone.

'who or somebody' 用法不当，应使用 'someone' 来表达某人。

× In my opinion, this people don't have the hope is to make a list. This life is usually. Have so many ringtone things so the Lister is doesn't work for them.

✓ In my opinion, these people don't have the hope to make a list. Life is usually busy. There are so many things ringing, so the list doesn't work for them.

'this people' 应为复数 'these people'，'the hope is to make a list' 结构不正确，应简化为 'hope to make a list'。

× In my opinion, this people don't have the hope is to make a list. This life is usually. Have so many ringtone things so the Lister is doesn't work for them.

✓ In my opinion, these people don't have the hope to make a list. Life is usually busy. There are so many things ringing, so the list doesn't work for them.

'ringer things' 可能是 'ringtone things' 的误写，应改为 'things ringing' 或 'many things'，且 'Lister' 应为 'list'。

× In my opinion, this people don't have the hope is to make a list. This life is usually. Have so many ringtone things so the Lister is doesn't work for them.

✓ In my opinion, these people don't have the hope to make a list. Life is usually busy. There are so many things ringing, so the list doesn't work for them.

'is doesn't work' 语法错误，应为 'doesn't work'。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone. Because. Is very simple and convenient bolh. To do that. And can short my time to do this.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very simple and convenient to do that, and it can save my time to do this.

句中 'bolh' 应为 'both'，且 'can short my time' 用法错误，应为 'can save my time'。此外，句子断裂，应合并为完整句子。