List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clear structure. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and avoid repeating phrases. Keep your answer concise and coherent.

例: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping to ensure I don't forget anything important.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to give a direct response and explain your reasoning clearly with supporting details.

例: No, I don't usually make lists for work because I prefer to handle tasks as they come, which helps me stay flexible.

提案: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Provide a clear reason why some people dislike making lists and support it with specific details.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to shop spontaneously without planning.

提案: Your answer is fragmented and unclear. Try to complete your sentences and explain your preference clearly with reasons.

例: I prefer to make lists both on paper and on my phone. When I have free time, I write on paper, but when I'm busy, I use my phone for convenience.

× Yes, definitely make a list whenever I when I go, when I'm shopping and then.

✓ Yes, I definitely make a list whenever I go shopping.

The original sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'definitely make' and has redundant phrases 'whenever I when I go'. The corrected sentence includes the subject and removes redundancy for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Oh, whenever I I whenever I go to the shop for buying anything, I make A at first I make a list and then.

✓ Oh, whenever I go to the shop to buy anything, I first make a list.

The phrase 'for buying anything' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to buy anything' as the infinitive form is used after 'go to the shop'. Also, 'make A at first' is unclear and corrected to 'first make a list' for clarity.

× Actually I I do I don't make a list for my work because when I when I worked, when I work an any things there that is the time I I don't need to write list.

✓ Actually, I don't make a list for my work because when I work on anything, I don't need to write a list.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and redundancy. 'When I worked' is past tense, but the context requires present tense 'when I work'. 'An any things' is incorrect; it should be 'on anything'. Also, 'write list' needs an article 'a' before 'list'.

× Actually it depends on their personal opinion or perspective and because some people like to make a least because they whenever they go to shop for buying anything and they forgot any things, some people.

✓ Actually, it depends on their personal opinion or perspective because some people like to make a list since whenever they go shopping and forget things.

The phrase 'go to shop for buying anything' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. 'Forgot any things' is incorrect; 'forget things' is the correct form. Also, 'make a least' is a typo and corrected to 'make a list'.

× Actually I prefer to make list on both be 'cause sometimes I am. Write a list, a paper bill 'cause the the time I because I whenever that time I am free and whenever I am very busy that I'm I.

✓ Actually, I prefer to make a list on both because sometimes I write a list on paper when I am free, and when I am very busy, I use my phone.

The phrase 'make list on both' is missing the article 'a' before 'list' and 'on both' is vague; corrected to 'on both' meaning paper and phone. 'Write a list, a paper bill' is unclear and corrected to 'write a list on paper'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.