List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Well, I usually don't make a shopping list. Why shop? Because I'm person who doesn't like making schedules. I found it a little bit restrictive. I prefer to shopping flexibly.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Well, I usually make at least only during the final weeks. By doing this I can organize my tasks better and complete my works efficiently. It helps me follow a clear schedule.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Oh, I don't like making this either. I find it quite stressful and restrictive. For example, when I make a list, I feel pressure to follow it strictly. I prefer doing things randomly and it feels more relaxed.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
Well, I prefer to. Make lists on my phone because it is very portable. For example I can. Check or update my list whenever I want, which is much more convenient than using papers.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“Why shop?”和“I prefer to shopping flexibly”。建议注意语法结构，避免重复和不连贯的表达，同时保持回答简洁自然。
例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I don't like strict schedules. I prefer to shop flexibly and decide what to buy on the spot.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答表达较为清晰，但有语法错误，如“make at least only during the final weeks”和“complete my works”。建议使用更准确的表达，并增加连接词使句子更流畅。
例: Yes, I usually make a list during the final weeks before deadlines. This helps me organize my tasks better and complete my work efficiently because I can follow a clear schedule.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答内容具体且有例子，但开头“making this”表达不准确。建议使用更自然的表达，并适当使用连接词增强连贯性。
例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it stressful and restrictive. For example, they may feel pressured to follow the list strictly, so they prefer to do things randomly, which feels more relaxed.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中存在断句不连贯的问题，如“prefer to. Make lists”。建议注意句子完整性和流畅性，同时使用连接词使表达更自然。
例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very portable. For example, I can check or update my list whenever I want, which is much more convenient than using paper.
文法
× Because I'm person who doesn't like making schedules.
✓ Because I'm a person who doesn't like making schedules.
这里缺少冠词“a”，在英语中，单数可数名词前通常需要冠词。缺少冠词会导致句子不完整。
× I prefer to shopping flexibly.
✓ I prefer to shop flexibly.
动词prefer后面接动词不定式时，动词应为原形，不能用动名词形式。
× I usually make at least only during the final weeks.
✓ I usually make lists only during the final weeks.
“at least only”搭配不当，且缺少宾语“lists”，需要调整词序和补充宾语。
× complete my works efficiently.
✓ complete my work efficiently.
work作为不可数名词时不加复数形式，使用复数形式“works”不正确。
× I don't like making this either.
✓ I don't like making them either.
这里指代复数“lists”，应使用复数代词“them”，而不是单数“this”。
× I prefer to. Make lists on my phone because it is very portable.
✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very portable.
句子中“to.”和“Make”之间不应有句号，且“Make”应小写，保持句子连贯。
× For example I can. Check or update my list whenever I want, which is much more convenient than using papers.
✓ For example, I can check or update my list whenever I want, which is much more convenient than using paper.
句中“can.”和“Check”之间不应有句号，且“papers”应为不可数名词“paper”。
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