List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ содержит несколько грамматических ошибок и повторений, например, "make list" вместо "make a list" и "lease" вместо "list". Рекомендуется использовать более связные предложения и избегать излишних повторов, чтобы ответ звучал естественнее и эффективнее.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping, especially for groceries. It helps me remember essential items like vegetables, fruits, and other necessities. This way, I stay organized and avoid forgetting anything important.

提案: Ответ содержит много пауз и нечетких формулировок, например, "I do at least of the plants" и "to forget. Do not forget". Рекомендуется строить предложения более плавно и использовать связующие слова для логичности.

例: Yes, I make a list of tasks I need to complete by the end of each workday. I usually plan my day in the morning, which helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important duties.

提案: В ответе есть повторения и небольшие ошибки, например, "prefer prefer" и "or least". Рекомендуется использовать более точные выражения и связные предложения для улучшения естественности речи.

例: Honestly, I believe it depends on a person's nature. Some people are more creative and don't like being restricted by strict plans. They prefer to go with the flow and stay open to new opportunities, which keeps their life active and interesting.

提案: Ответ содержит разрозненные предложения и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется объединять предложения и использовать связующие слова для более плавного и логичного ответа.

例: I think it depends on the situation. If I have my planner and a pen with me, I prefer to write the list on paper. However, if I don't have anything to write on, I usually make the list on my phone.

× Yes, I do make list when I go shopping especially for groceries, it is really hard for me to remember the list the items which I have to buy such as vegetables and fruits and other stuff.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping especially for groceries, it is really hard for me to remember the items which I have to buy such as vegetables, fruits, and other stuff.

The word 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. Also, 'the list the items' is incorrect; it should be 'the items'. Additionally, 'vegetables and fruits' should be separated by a comma for clarity.

× I do at least of the plants which I have to do till the end of the work day every day starting from.

✓ I do at least some of the plans which I have to do till the end of the work day every day starting from morning.

The phrase 'at least of the plants' is incorrect. It should be 'at least some of the plans'. 'Plants' is a wrong word here; 'plans' is correct. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed 'morning' to complete the thought.

× I do a plan and it helps me to stay organized and to forget.

✓ I make a plan and it helps me to stay organized and not to forget.

The phrase 'I do a plan' is unnatural; 'I make a plan' is correct. Also, 'and to forget' contradicts the intended meaning; it should be 'and not to forget'.

× Some people are more creative and. Do not prefer prefer to be limited by strict plans or least they like to go with the flow and stay open to new opportunities, which helps them to stay active and curious in life.

✓ Some people are more creative and do not prefer to be limited by strict plans or lists; they like to go with the flow and stay open to new opportunities, which helps them to stay active and curious in life.

The sentence had a period in the middle causing a fragment. 'least' should be 'lists'. Also, the sentence needed proper conjunctions and punctuation to connect ideas clearly.

× I think it depends on the situation when I am in charge to use the list if I have my planner notebook.

✓ I think it depends on the situation when I am in charge of using the list if I have my planner notebook.

The phrase 'in charge to use' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in charge of using'.

× And a pen with me. Then of course I prefer to write on paper, but if I don't have anything to write on then I would choose to write the list on my phone.

✓ And a pen with me. Then of course I prefer to write on paper, but if I don't have anything to write on, then I would choose to write the list on my phone.

This sentence is mostly correct; a comma is added before 'then' for clarity. No major grammar issue here.