List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用有误，导致表达不清晰。建议练习简单句型，确保回答直接且完整，避免语法错误。

例: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list, especially when I go to the supermarket to buy essential items.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整，缺少连贯性。建议使用完整句子，清楚表达观点，并用连接词使回答更流畅。

例: Sometimes I make a list for my work, but it doesn't always work because I don't always follow it strictly.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，表达含糊。建议学习如何用完整句子表达原因，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it is too restrictive and prefer to be more flexible.

提案: 回答中有发音和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议练习正确的句型和词汇，确保表达清晰且自然。

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I carry it everywhere and can check my list anytime.

× Sometimes I will do a lacewing sharp.

✓ Sometimes I will do a shopping list.

这里'shopping'是动名词形式，表示购物的动作，原句中的'lacewing sharp'是拼写错误，应改为'shopping list'。动名词用法错误导致句子不通顺。

× Such as I will go to. Supermarkets in something I. Must be boy.

✓ For example, I will go to supermarkets to buy something I must have.

原句结构混乱，缺少连贯性和完整的句子结构。需要调整词序和补充缺失的成分，使句子完整且符合英语表达习惯。

× Sometimes I make a list for my work, but I think it's doesn't work 'cause.

✓ Sometimes I make a list for my work, but I think it doesn't work because.

'it's doesn't'是错误的，'it'是主语，'doesn't'是谓语，不能同时使用缩写形式。应使用'it doesn't'。此外，'cause'应写为完整形式'because'以正式表达。

× I will not. Two things. Follows a list.

✓ I will not follow a list for two things.

原句断句错误，且'Follows'应为动词原形'follow'，因为主语是第一人称单数'I'，动词不加-s。句子应连贯表达否定意愿。

× Some people did like making lists be called defied its restrictive and prefer more.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer more freedom.

原句时态混乱，'did like'应为一般现在时'don't like'，且句子结构不完整，'be called defied its restrictive'不通顺，应改为'find it restrictive'。

× I pray for Michael list on my phone to 'cause I take my phone everywhere and I can check my list anywhere.

✓ I prefer to make my list on my phone because I take my phone everywhere and can check my list anywhere.

'I pray for Michael list'拼写和用词错误，应为'I prefer to make my list'。'to 'cause'应为'because'。句子表达意图是偏好使用手机做清单。