List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误和重复表达，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更地道的表达方式。

例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I remember the items I need. I prefer to buy the things I often use, so making a list feels unnecessary to me.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子，注意语法准确性，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because I have many tasks to complete daily. It helps me remember everything and stay organized, especially since I tend to forget things easily.

提案: 回答中有口语填充词和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议减少口语化词汇，理清句子结构，使用更准确的词汇表达观点。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it's a waste of time. They either have a good memory or prefer the freedom to decide their tasks spontaneously.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整且含糊。建议练习完整句子表达，避免重复和不连贯，使用准确词汇描述偏好。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I always check it. Using a phone helps me remember tasks better than paper lists.

× My shop, you know, I just buy the things that I usually buy an I think so.

✓ My shopping, you know, I just buy the things that I usually buy, I think so.

这里'shop'用错了，应该用'shopping'表示购物行为。'shop'是名词，表示商店，而'shopping'是动名词，表示购物活动。

× So make a list is unnecessary, yeah.

✓ So making a list is unnecessary, yeah.

这里缺少动名词形式，'make a list'应改为'making a list'，因为它作为主语使用时需要动名词形式。

× so making a task is making that list is quite necessary or I will just forget things, you know, since I'm just getting a more forgetful than than I was before.

✓ so making a task list is quite necessary or I will just forget things, you know, since I'm just getting more forgetful than I was before.

这里重复使用了'making a task is making that list'，应简化为'making a task list'。另外，'a more forgetful'中'more'前不需要冠词'a'。

× since I'm just getting a more forgetful than than I was before.

✓ since I'm just getting more forgetful than I was before.

这里重复了'than'，应去掉多余的一个。

× so they don't spend time making list.

✓ so they don't spend time making lists.

'making list'缺少复数形式，应该是'making lists'，表示制作多个清单。

× I think these days make it always on phone is much more popular than making it making this on the on the book and notebook 'cause you know, we always check up our phones.

✓ I think these days making it always on the phone is much more popular than making it on a book or notebook because, you know, we always check our phones.

'make it always on phone'应改为'making it always on the phone'，'phone'前需要定冠词'the'。'making this on the on the book and notebook'应改为'making it on a book or notebook'，冠词使用错误且表达不清。

× sometimes you just can find where you're a warrior paper race, right?

✓ sometimes you just can't find where your paper is, right?

原句语义不清，推测为'can't find your paper'，'warrior paper race'是错误表达，应改为'can't find where your paper is'。