List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 많아 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 문장을 완성형으로 만들고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 쇼핑할 때 리스트를 만드는 이유와 그 효과를 자연스럽게 연결하는 문장을 연습하세요.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me reduce my spending and shop more quickly.

提案: 답변이 불명확하고 문장이 단절되어 이해하기 어렵습니다. 리스트가 왜 효과가 없는지 구체적인 이유를 명확하게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다. 문장을 완성형으로 만들고, 논리적으로 연결하는 연습을 하세요.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work, but I think it doesn't always work because my tasks are unpredictable and change frequently.

提案: 답변이 매우 불명확하고 문법적으로 맞지 않아 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 왜 사람들이 리스트를 싫어하는지 간단하고 명확한 이유를 문장으로 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel they can remember everything without writing it down.

提案: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 단어 선택이 부적절합니다. 휴대폰으로 리스트를 만드는 이유를 명확하고 자연스럽게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient, portable, and I can easily edit it anytime.

× Just when you shop.

✓ Only when I shop.

The phrase 'Just when you shop' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Only when I shop' correctly expresses the intended meaning using the present tense and proper pronoun.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I show because if I made.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because if I make one,

The word 'show' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'shop'. Also, 'if I made' should be 'if I make' to maintain present tense consistency.

× At least. I can. Reduce my. Pay and. My plan is very fast, OK.

✓ At least I can reduce my spending and my plan is very fast, OK.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Reduce my pay' is likely intended as 'reduce my spending'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical structure.

× Yes. I make a list for. I work but I think it doesn't. Work because. Work is not computable and. Not flexible.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work but I think it doesn't work because work is not computable and not flexible.

The sentence has fragmented parts and incorrect use of 'computable'. The sentence is corrected for proper present tense and clarity.

× When I walk. Very hard. Everything is.

✓ When I work very hard, everything is difficult.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Walk' is likely a mispronunciation of 'work'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical structure.

× Because. They are. Don't dating don't need. Least because they can.

✓ Because they don't need lists, they can do everything without them.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect pronouns and verbs. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun and verb usage.

× If they think, but it's not. Oh, good type. I think so.

✓ If they think so, but it's not a good type. I think so.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction attempts to preserve the intended meaning with proper sentence structure.

× Are you? Like more than. My pone. To make a list.

✓ I like to use my phone to make a list.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and is fragmented. The correction uses the correct pronouns and sentence structure.

× Because. **** is very compatible and. Taking you sleaze. And small and. Can do anything. OK.

✓ Because it is very convenient, easy to use, small, and can do anything, OK.

The original sentence contains unclear words and incorrect adjectives. The correction replaces unclear words with appropriate adjectives and improves sentence clarity.