List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ неестественный и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать правильное время (Present Simple) и избегать лишних фраз. Также стоит структурировать ответ, начиная с прямого ответа, затем объяснение. Например, "No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I have a good memory."

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I have a good memory. I prefer to remember what I need to buy rather than writing it down.

提案: Ответ содержит ошибки времени и неясное выражение "voice of time". Следует использовать Present Simple и более понятные выражения. Также стоит добавить связующее слово для логичности.

例: No, I don't make a list for my work because I prefer working spontaneously. In my opinion, making a list wastes time.

提案: Ответ достаточно хороший, но можно улучшить связность и разнообразить лексику. Используйте связующие слова и более точные выражения.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time. Instead, they prefer to memorize things, which they find more efficient.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Следует использовать правильные времена и слова, а также связующие слова для логичности.

例: I prefer making a list on my phone rather than on paper because it's easier to edit. Also, paper lists can be lost easily.

× No, I did not.

✓ No, I don't.

The question is in the present tense ('Do you make a list?'), so the answer should also be in the present tense. Using 'did not' indicates past tense, which is inconsistent here.

× She won't.

✓ I won't.

The pronoun 'She' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to themselves. It should be 'I won't' to match the subject.

× I just need to memorize or do I need to buy?

✓ I just need to memorize what I need to buy.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the ideas into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I did not.

✓ No, I don't.

Again, the question is in present tense, so the answer should be in present tense as well.

× In my opinion, making a list is just a voice of time.

✓ In my opinion, making a list is just a waste of time.

The phrase 'voice of time' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'waste of time' to express something unproductive.

× Some people indeed don't like to make lists.

✓ Some people indeed don't like making lists.

The verb 'like' is commonly followed by the gerund form when expressing general preferences.

× They think that it is just a waste of time and they prefer memorizing things.

✓ They think that it is just a waste of time and prefer memorizing things.

The second 'they' is unnecessary and can be omitted for smoother sentence flow.

× I prefer making a list on my phone. Then making it on paper because it is much easier to to correct what I want to buy.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone rather than on paper because it is much easier to correct what I want to buy.

The phrase 'Then making it on paper' is incorrect and unclear. Using 'rather than' correctly contrasts the two options. Also, 'to to' is a typo and should be 'to'.

× A paper can lossed.

✓ Paper can be lost.

'Lossed' is not a correct form; the past participle of 'lose' is 'lost'. Also, 'a paper' is incorrect here; 'paper' is uncountable in this context.