List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence flow. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and reduce repetitive phrases.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on a notepad before going to the grocery store so I don't forget items like fruits, vegetables, and meat.

提案: Your answer is informative but could be improved by combining short sentences and using linking words for better coherence. Also, avoid minor grammar mistakes and capitalize properly.

例: I usually make a to-do list the day before work because it helps me stay organized and prioritize tasks, preventing distractions from phone calls or messages.

提案: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically. Avoid fragmented sentences and unclear phrases.

例: I think some people avoid making lists because they prefer to keep tasks in their mind, or they feel that unexpected things might come up, preventing them from completing their to-do list.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some unclear phrases and minor errors. Try to use precise vocabulary and correct grammar. Also, use linking words to improve flow and clarity.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's handy when I'm outside. I can quickly note items, and it syncs with my calendar, making it very convenient.

× I usually use a notepad and a pen to write the things that I like to buy like fruits, vegetables, meat in order not to forget.

✓ I usually use a notepad and a pen to write down the things that I like to buy, like fruits, vegetables, and meat, in order not to forget.

The verb 'write' should be followed by the particle 'down' to form the phrasal verb 'write down', which means to record something. Also, commas are needed to separate items in a list for clarity.

× I usually make A to do list.

✓ I usually make a to-do list.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' because it is in the middle of the sentence. Also, 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' to correctly form the compound noun.

× The day before I go to work.

✓ I make it the day before I go to work.

The original sentence is a fragment lacking a main verb and subject. Adding 'I make it' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I believe some people avoid making list because they have the things to do in their mind or it might be the reason when they make To Do List things would. Come their way and they might not get to things on their To Do List.

✓ I believe some people avoid making lists because they have the things to do in their mind, or it might be that when they make a to-do list, things come their way and they might not get to the things on their to-do list.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' to agree with 'some people'. Also, 'To Do List' should be lowercase and hyphenated as 'to-do list'. The sentence was fragmented and needed restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very handy die when I am outside.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very handy to use when I am outside.

The phrase 'handy die' is incorrect. It should be 'handy to use' to correctly express convenience. The preposition 'to' is necessary before the verb 'use'.

× I can note things down very quickly and it can also think with my calendar, which becomes very convenient anywhere I go.

✓ I can note things down very quickly and it can also sync with my calendar, which becomes very convenient anywhere I go.

The pronoun 'it' refers to the phone app or device, which cannot 'think'. The correct verb is 'sync' (synchronize) with the calendar. This correction clarifies the intended meaning.