List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng các từ liên kết để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store to avoid forgetting important items. This helps me save money because I only buy what I really need. For example, when I go to the supermarket with my mother, I check the list to make sure we get everything. It not only prevents me from buying unnecessary things but also helps me remember what we need.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và dễ hiểu hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết ý và tránh lỗi chia động từ. Ngoài ra, nên cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and focus on what I need to do. Also, it helps me manage my time better. For example, I write down important tasks first so I don't forget them during the day.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi phát âm và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để truyền đạt ý rõ ràng hơn.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time. They feel confident that they can remember important tasks without writing them down. Therefore, they prefer to start working immediately without making a list.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi phát âm và dùng từ đúng nghĩa. Ngoài ra, nên dùng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và câu không hoàn chỉnh.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because I can access them anytime. Also, I can share the list easily with my family and friends using apps.

× I only buy one really need.

✓ I only buy what I really need.

The original sentence lacks a proper object after 'buy one'. It should be 'what I really need' to correctly express the idea of buying necessary items. This is a singular/plural issue because 'one' is incorrectly used here.

× when it goes through supermarket with my mother

✓ when I go through the supermarket with my mother

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect here; it should be 'I' as the speaker is referring to themselves. Also, 'supermarket' needs the definite article 'the'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and pronouns.

× I downloaded items we want to buy and bring the list with me.

✓ I write down the items we want to buy and bring the list with me.

'Downloaded' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'write down' or 'note down'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward. This is an incorrect use of verbs and pronouns.

× Is not only revenge me from buying the next three teams but also helps me they forgot the wires are in need.

✓ It not only prevents me from buying unnecessary items but also helps me remember the things I need.

The original sentence is confusing and contains multiple errors including wrong word choice ('revenge' instead of 'prevents'), incorrect phrase ('next three teams' instead of 'unnecessary items'), and unclear meaning. This is a sentence structure error.

× It work very effectively, it helps me organize it and focus is where I want to do.

✓ It works very effectively; it helps me organize and focus on what I want to do.

The verb 'work' should be 'works' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'focus is where I want to do' is incorrect; it should be 'focus on what I want to do'. This is a third person singular issue.

× Also it help me to make a time in.

✓ Also, it helps me to manage my time.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The phrase 'make a time in' is incorrect; 'manage my time' is appropriate. This is a third person singular issue.

× We already tie what I really need in the important task also so aren't so alert to making a list when I work.

✓ I already know what I really need to do for important tasks, so I am always careful to make a list when I work.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect phrases like 'We already tie' and 'aren't so alert to making a list'. This is a sentence structure error.

× Amex Bear and some people don't like making lists because they perceive making Liz as a time consuming.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they perceive making lists as time-consuming.

'Amex Bear' is likely a mishearing or typo and should be removed. 'Making Liz' should be 'making lists'. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and spelling errors.

× They feel confident about their ability without writing them down.

✓ They feel confident about their ability without writing things down.

'Them' is incorrect here because it refers to plural objects not previously mentioned; 'things' is more appropriate. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and quantifiers.

× They still remember about necessary items an important task, so they spent time living to living straight into their work.

✓ They still remember necessary items and important tasks, so they spend time going straight into their work.

'Remember about' is incorrect; 'remember' does not require 'about'. 'Spent time living to living' is incorrect; it should be 'spend time going'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and verb tense.

× I refer making a list on my phone, radio then on paper because it helps me to access the list all of the time and anyway also I can say the list with my family, my friends.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone rather than on paper because it helps me access the list all the time and I can also share the list with my family and friends.

'Refer' should be 'prefer'. 'Radio then on paper' is incorrect; 'rather than on paper' is correct. 'Say the list' should be 'share the list'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and vocabulary.

× An idiot retrained Liz on lots of apps.

✓ I have stored lists on lots of apps.

The original sentence is nonsensical and likely a mishearing or typo. 'An idiot retrained Liz' makes no sense. The intended meaning is probably 'I have stored lists on lots of apps.' This is an incorrect use of adjectives and sentence structure.