List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and clear by directly answering the question, then providing specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, when I go grocery shopping, I write down all the items to avoid forgetting anything and to save time.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details using linking words. Also, focus on correct vocabulary and sentence construction to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I make lists for my work in construction because there are many measurements and diagrams to keep track of. This helps me stay organized and avoid confusion during projects.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to directly answer the question by explaining reasons why some people avoid making lists, using clear and simple language with linking words to connect ideas.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally. However, I believe lists help reduce confusion and make life more organized.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your response more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, correct minor mistakes for better fluency.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's the easiest way to write and carry them. For instance, when I go shopping, I can quickly check my phone to see what I need to buy.

× Becaused you know when we make a list there is very less charge to for get anything when we go for a shopping because when we go for the grocery.

✓ Because you know when we make a list there is very little chance to forget anything when we go shopping because when we go for groceries.

The word 'Becaused' is incorrect; it should be 'Because'. Also, 'very less charge to for get' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'very little chance to forget'. 'Go for a shopping' should be 'go shopping' and 'go for the grocery' should be 'go for groceries'. These corrections fix past tense and phrase usage errors.

× Then we have a lot of things to buy and that's why we need to write each and everything.

✓ Then we have a lot of things to buy and that's why we need to write down each and everything.

The phrase 'write each and everything' is missing the preposition 'down' to be correct. Also, 'each and everything' is acceptable but adding 'down' clarifies the action. This addresses singular/plural and prepositional usage.

× Yes, I also make the list for the work because I work in the construction and you know there are there are many mathematical E. Diagrams in there, so I need to go for it and there are many dimension.

✓ Yes, I also make a list for work because I work in construction and you know there are many mathematical diagrams there, so I need to refer to them and there are many dimensions.

'Make the list for the work' should be 'make a list for work' to be more natural. 'In the construction' should be 'in construction'. 'Mathematical E. Diagrams' is unclear; corrected to 'mathematical diagrams'. 'There are many dimension' should be 'there are many dimensions' to fix singular/plural issue.

× I always like right for in the list and it also helped me a lot because I never get confused in between anything when they may.

✓ I always like to write in the list and it also helps me a lot because I never get confused about anything when they come.

'Like right for in the list' is incorrect; it should be 'like to write in the list'. 'Helped' should be 'helps' to match present tense. 'Confused in between anything' should be 'confused about anything'. 'When they may' is unclear; corrected to 'when they come'. This fixes preposition and tense errors.

× Yes, there are many people who don't like to make English, but I am not in the in that people becaused.

✓ Yes, there are many people who don't like to make lists, but I am not one of those people because.

'Make English' is incorrect; it should be 'make lists'. 'I am not in the in that people' is incorrect; corrected to 'I am not one of those people'. This fixes pronoun and word choice errors.

× The list is a good thing, you know, we are not confused when go for shopping and go to work and I think will if we make a list, we can like live our life very. Affectively and like only track.

✓ The list is a good thing, you know; we are not confused when we go shopping and go to work, and I think if we make a list, we can live our life very effectively and keep track.

The sentence has run-on issues and incorrect conjunction use. Added semicolons and commas to separate clauses properly. 'When go for shopping' corrected to 'when we go shopping'. 'Will if' corrected to 'if'. 'Affectively' corrected to 'effectively'. 'Like only track' corrected to 'keep track'. This fixes conjunction and sentence structure errors.

× Yes, I prefer to make the list on the phone because it is like easiest way to write down anything like it is also easiest way to carry when we go for shopping and for grocery and we can easily pick up your phone and see anything what we're down.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make the list on the phone because it is the easiest way to write down anything; it is also the easiest way to carry when we go shopping and for groceries, and we can easily pick up our phone and see anything we've written down.

'Like easiest way' should be 'the easiest way' to use the definite article correctly. 'For grocery' should be 'for groceries'. 'Your phone' should be 'our phone' to maintain pronoun consistency. 'See anything what we're down' should be 'see anything we've written down'. This fixes modal verb usage and article errors.

× So I prefer to make dillistone form.

✓ So I prefer to make the list on my phone.

The phrase 'dillistone form' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or typo. Corrected to 'make the list on my phone' to clarify meaning and fix pronoun use.