List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Actually I do because I prefer to make a list before I do everything.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
I do indeed and it does work. Because the list can help me avoid missing anything important. And improve my efficiency.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
For one reason, they may think it troublesome or a waste of time and for another, perhaps it's just a lifestyle for them.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I prefer to make a list on paper because after I finish a task I can take it out and it can give me a sense of accomplishment.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答较为简短且表达不够自然，建议直接回答问题并补充具体原因，避免使用“before I do everything”这种不太地道的表达。
例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中句子较为零散，缺少连贯的连接词，建议合并句子并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me avoid missing important tasks and improve my efficiency.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答内容较好，但表达稍显复杂，建议简化句子结构并使用更自然的连接词。
例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it troublesome or think it's a waste of time. Also, some just prefer a more spontaneous lifestyle.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 78.0提案: 回答表达基本清晰，但“take it out”用词不准确，建议使用更合适的表达并补充具体细节。
例: I prefer making lists on paper because crossing off completed tasks gives me a real sense of accomplishment.
文法
× Because the list can help me avoid missing anything important.
✓ The list can help me avoid missing anything important.
句子以连词Because开头，导致句子结构不完整，属于句子结构错误。应将其改为完整句子，去掉Because。
× And improve my efficiency.
✓ It also improves my efficiency.
句子以连词And开头且缺少主语和谓语，导致句子结构不完整。应补充主语和谓语，使句子完整。
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