List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích thêm nếu cần, tránh dùng những câu dài và lủng củng.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. This helps me remember what I need and avoid buying unnecessary items.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời còn dài dòng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I often make a list before working because it helps me organize my tasks. As a result, I can save time and focus on important work.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu do lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng đơn giản nhưng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để truyền đạt ý rõ ràng.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it is too strict and they are afraid they cannot follow the plan.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I prefer to write a draft list on paper with a pen because it feels more natural. However, when I finish my tasks, I like to use my phone to keep track of everything.

× Before shopping, anything I have a habit to list in repair or nothing I need to buy before shopping?

✓ Before shopping, I have a habit of listing items to repair or things I need to buy.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and unclear phrasing. The phrase 'anything I have a habit to list in repair or nothing I need to buy' is confusing and ungrammatical. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses the correct preposition 'of' after 'habit'.

× I often write a list not before I work because it helped me to organize and plan what I need to do so it can save time and I can focus on what really I need to do.

✓ I often write a list before I work because it helps me organize and plan what I need to do, so it saves time and I can focus on what I really need to do.

The original sentence has tense inconsistency and awkward phrasing. 'Not before I work' is incorrect; it should be 'before I work'. Also, 'helped' should be 'helps' to match the present tense context. The phrase 'what really I need to do' is corrected to 'what I really need to do' for natural word order.

× I suppose that people who don't like this. Thing because they are afraid of blending in there. Scare up not cannot follow follow up the strict. Plan an SO.

✓ I suppose that people who don't like this are afraid of blending in there and are scared they cannot follow up the strict plan and so on.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. The correction combines the fragments into a coherent sentence, correcting word choice and grammar. 'Scare up not cannot follow follow up the strict. Plan an SO.' is corrected to 'are scared they cannot follow up the strict plan and so on.' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× When writing a draft for. On the list thing I prefer to charge and write in pen in papers but when I have to finish all I will do I prefer more on using my phone.

✓ When writing a draft of the list, I prefer to write with a pen on paper, but when I have finished everything I need to do, I prefer using my phone.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect phrases like 'prefer to charge' and 'write in pen in papers'. The correction clarifies the meaning, corrects prepositions, and improves sentence flow.