List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to start with a direct response to the question, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, I often buy sparkling water and snacks, so having a list ensures I don't forget them.

提案: Your answer is on the right track but needs clearer sentence structure and linking words. Try to combine ideas into coherent sentences and explain how making lists helps you work more efficiently.

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work that includes the tasks and their procedures. This helps me prioritise effectively, so I can complete important tasks first and avoid wasting time.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect reasons. Avoid vague phrases and focus on specific reasons why some people dislike lists.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory and feel confident managing tasks without writing them down. Additionally, they may dislike planning and prefer to let things happen naturally.

提案: Your answer is mostly clear but could be improved by combining sentences and using linking words for better flow. Also, avoid short, fragmented sentences.

例: I definitely prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easier to find notes by searching keywords. Moreover, I can update the list anytime, which is very convenient.

× Is a definitely will make a list awards shop becauses if I don't make a list.

✓ I definitely will make a list when I shop because if I don't make a list,

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Is a' at the beginning and 'awards' instead of 'when I'. The modal verb 'will' is correctly used to express future intention, but the sentence structure is incorrect. Correcting to 'I definitely will make a list when I shop because if I don't make a list,' fixes the modal verb usage and sentence structure.

× I always remember something like in this soil.

✓ I always forget something like this.

The original sentence 'I always remember something like in this soil' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely that the speaker forgets items. The phrase 'in this soil' is incorrect and nonsensical here. Correcting to 'I always forget something like this' clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× Amuch or sparkling water or something like that.

✓ a much-needed item like sparkling water or something like that.

The phrase 'Amuch' is incorrect; it should be 'a much-needed item' or simply 'something like sparkling water'. The correction clarifies the quantifier usage and makes the sentence meaningful.

× I mean they don't want to miss anything.

✓ I mean, I don't want to miss anything.

The original sentence uses 'they' which is unclear and inconsistent with the speaker's perspective. Changing 'they' to 'I' aligns with the speaker's intention and corrects the sentence structure.

× Yes, definitely. I will make a list for my work including the amount of work.

✓ Yes, definitely. I make a list for my work including the amount of work.

The question is about habitual action, so present simple tense is appropriate. Using 'will' implies future intention, which is less suitable here. Changing to 'I make a list' correctly uses the present tense for habitual actions.

× On the procedures of it.

✓ about the procedures of it.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to use with 'procedures' in this context is 'about' to indicate the content of the list.

× From this way I know the priorities and I can prioritize the tasks effectively.

✓ In this way, I know the priorities and can prioritize the tasks effectively.

The phrase 'From this way' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'In this way'. Also, 'I can' is better combined with the previous clause for smoother sentence flow.

× Which makes the whole process less of roaming.

✓ Which makes the whole process less time-consuming.

The phrase 'less of roaming' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely that the process is more efficient or takes less time. 'Less time-consuming' is a correct and clear expression.

× This pastor definite.

✓ This is definitely the case.

The phrase 'This pastor definite' is incorrect and unclear. It seems to be a mishearing or typo. Correcting to 'This is definitely the case' makes the sentence grammatically correct and meaningful.

× Some people. Don't like making lists because they can remember their priorities.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they can remember their priorities.

The original sentence has an unnecessary period after 'Some people' which breaks the sentence incorrectly. Removing the period corrects the pronoun usage and sentence flow.

× UN talks tasks well and another reason is that I think they don't like making plans.

✓ They can talk about tasks well, and another reason is that I think they don't like making plans.

The phrase 'UN talks tasks well' is incorrect and unclear. It likely means 'They can talk about tasks well'. Correcting this improves sentence structure and clarity.

× They just want you let everything and happen. Naturally.

✓ They just want to let everything happen naturally.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'you' and separates 'let everything and happen'. Correcting to 'They just want to let everything happen naturally' fixes pronoun misuse and sentence structure.

× Or your phone. I definitely prefer to make lists on my phone because it's much.

✓ I definitely prefer to make lists on my phone because it's much

The phrase 'Or your phone.' is a fragment and does not connect properly to the sentence. Removing it corrects the sentence structure.

× Easier to locate the notes by searching the keywords if I don't remember the location.

✓ easier to locate notes by searching keywords if I don't remember their location.

The phrase 'the notes' and 'the keywords' is better as 'notes' and 'keywords' in general. Also, 'the location' is vague; 'their location' clarifies it. This correction improves sentence structure and clarity.

× And I can always update the note. Which? Is convenient.

✓ and I can always update the notes, which is convenient.

The sentence fragment 'Which? Is convenient.' is incorrect. Combining it with the previous sentence and correcting punctuation improves sentence structure and flow.