List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ естественный и понятный, но можно добавить связующие слова для улучшения связности и немного расширить детали, чтобы сделать ответ более полным.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember essential household products. For example, I always include cleaning supplies and personal care items like shampoo and soap. This way, I don't forget anything important, and I can shop more efficiently.

提案: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Рекомендуется использовать простые и правильные предложения, а также связующие слова для логичности.

例: Yes, I make a list to plan my work, especially when I have to switch between different tasks. I try to organize everything before I start working to be more efficient.

提案: Ответ содержит паузы и нечеткие выражения. Рекомендуется использовать более плавные связки и чётко формулировать мысли.

例: Well, there are two reasons. On one hand, some people don't want to spend time making plans or lists. On the other hand, I think they might want to avoid planning because they prefer to be spontaneous in their life.

提案: Ответ содержит повторения и некоторые ошибки. Рекомендуется использовать более чёткие и связные предложения, избегать повторов и уточнять детали.

例: It depends on the situation. For example, if I have my planner and pen, I prefer to make a list on paper because it feels more organized. However, if I only have my phone, I find digital lists more convenient since they are easily accessible and can be updated quickly.

× Yes, I do least with the plans of the work, specially when it's hard to move from one job to the second.

✓ Yes, I do lists with the plans of the work, especially when it's hard to move from one job to the second.

The word 'least' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'lists' to indicate multiple items. Also, 'specially' should be 'especially' for correct meaning.

× I am trying to I try to. Make a list and plan everything before I go to my work.

✓ I try to make a list and plan everything before I go to my work.

The sentence is fragmented and contains repetition. Combining the phrases into a single coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× maybe they don't want to spend any time for making plans or at least what to buy or what to do in the future.

✓ maybe they don't want to spend any time making plans or at least deciding what to buy or what to do in the future.

The preposition 'for' is unnecessary after 'spend time'. Also, 'at least what to buy' is incomplete; adding 'deciding' clarifies the meaning.

× On the other hand, I have a suggestion that. Prediction that they are trying to avoid this kind of plants in their life.

✓ On the other hand, I have a prediction that they are trying to avoid this kind of plans in their life.

The sentence is fragmented and contains a typo 'plants' instead of 'plans'. Combining the sentences and correcting the typo improves clarity.

× I prefer to make at least on paper because it feels more organized, intangible.

✓ I prefer to make at least on paper because it feels more organized and tangible.

The phrase 'at least on paper' is unclear; likely intended 'a list on paper'. Also, 'intangible' contradicts 'organized'; 'tangible' is appropriate here.

× I find it more convenient to use a digital's list.

✓ I find it more convenient to use a digital list.

The possessive form 'digital's' is incorrect here; 'digital list' is the correct noun phrase.

× Since it's easily assessable and I can update.

✓ Since it's easily accessible and I can update it.

The word 'assessable' is incorrect; the correct word is 'accessible'. Also, the sentence is incomplete without the object 'it' after 'update'.