List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Та хариултаа илүү товч бөгөөд тодорхой болгох хэрэгтэй. Мөн холбоос үг ашиглан өгүүлбэрүүдийг уялдуулах нь яриаг илүү логик, ойлгомжтой болгоно. Жишээ нь, "because" эсвэл "so" гэх мэт үгсийг ашиглах боломжтой.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I have ADHD and tend to forget things easily. This helps me shop more effectively and save time, so I can focus on other important tasks at home. Overall, making a list reduces my stress and makes the process smoother.

提案: Хариулт тань тодорхой биш, үг хэллэгийн алдаа их байна. Илүү энгийн, бүтээлч өгүүлбэр ашиглан, холбоос үг ашиглаж, санаагаа илүү тодорхой илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй.

例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work, but I am trying to develop this habit. Currently, I take mental notes to avoid jumping from one task to another. I believe making a list would be very useful for organizing my work.

提案: Хариулт тань ойлгомжгүй, үг хэллэгийн алдаа их байна. Илүү тодорхой, логик холбоос үг ашиглан, санаагаа бүрэн илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй. Мөн илүү нарийвчилсан тайлбар өгөөрэй.

例: I think it depends on the person. Some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time. Instead, they prefer to start tasks immediately. Others may find lists helpful for staying organized.

提案: Хариулт тань тодорхой бус, үг хэллэгийн алдаа их байна. Илүү энгийн, логик холбоос үг ашиглан, санаагаа илүү тодорхой илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй. Мөн үгсийг зөв ашиглахыг хичээгээрэй.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because although using my phone is easier, I often get distracted. When I unlock my phone, I usually open Instagram immediately and lose focus.

× I think it varies from people.

✓ I think it varies from person to person.

The phrase 'varies from people' is incorrect because 'varies' requires a singular object or a phrase indicating individual variation. The correct expression is 'varies from person to person' to indicate differences among individuals.

× Most people. Think it's faster too.

✓ Most people think it's faster too.

The sentence is fragmented due to the period after 'people'. Combining the two parts into one sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer list, although making a list on your phone is a lot more easier, but I have this habit.

✓ I prefer lists, although making a list on your phone is a lot easier, but I have this habit.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to match the context of preference in general. Also, 'more easier' is incorrect; 'easier' alone is sufficient as it is a comparative adjective.

× I had lost in the. I get consumed by it.

✓ I get lost in it. I get consumed by it.

The phrase 'I had lost in the' is incorrect and incomplete. The correct expression is 'I get lost in it' to indicate being absorbed or distracted by something.

× I try to. Not jump from 1 task to another.

✓ I try not to jump from one task to another.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. Combining the parts into one sentence with correct word order improves clarity and grammatical correctness.